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1、三、增加細(xì)節(jié)的5大策略 在英語書面表達(dá)中，增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容的描述是必不可少的。在信息提綱類寫作中，考生一定不能簡(jiǎn)單地翻譯或者僅僅完成所給條目的指定內(nèi)容；在看圖作文中更不能只是輕描淡寫圖片內(nèi)容，否則很有可能造成內(nèi)容不充實(shí)、字?jǐn)?shù)要求不達(dá)標(biāo)或者結(jié)構(gòu)不連貫。適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，能夠使習(xí)作流暢、豐滿，達(dá)到應(yīng)有的表達(dá)效果。 微技能(一)　列舉具體的實(shí)例進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說明 1.我們青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境、拯救地球。 Weteenagersshoulddowhatwecantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth. →Weteenagersshoulddowhatwe

2、cantoprotecttheenvironmentandsavetheearth.Forexample，wecanuserecyclablebagsinsteadofplasticbags，refusetousesingle-useproducts，plantmoretreesandsavewaterandenergy. 2.我要花一些時(shí)間和父母待在一起。 I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents. →I’llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents，chattingwiththemanddoingsomehousework.

3、 3.我想找一個(gè)像我一樣喜歡旅行的筆友。 I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme. →I’dliketoseekapenpalwhoisinterestedintravelingjustlikeme.Ifpossible，wecantraveltogetherorsharetravelingexperiences. 4.我是一個(gè)充滿活力的健康男孩，我非常喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)。 I’mahealthyboyfullofenergy，soIlikesportsverymuch. →Iamahealthyboyfullof

4、energy，soIlikesportsverymuch，especiallyoutdooractivities.WheneverIhavetime，I’llgohikingormountainclimbingwithmyclassmates. 題組過關(guān)1　根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 1.TheInternetisplayingamoreandmoreimportantpartinourdailylife.Wecannotonlyreadnewsfromhomeandabroad(我們不僅能閱讀國(guó)內(nèi)外的新聞)，butalsogetinformation，sendemailsandattendo

5、nlineschools. 2.LauraisastandardAmericanstyle.ShespeaksperfectAmericanEnglish(她說一口完美的美式英語)，andthat’swhyIamcrazyabouther. 3.However，itseemspeopleareunawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesoncommunication.Forexample，manypeoplebegintopaylessattentiontoface-to-facecommunication(比如，很多人開始越來越不重視面對(duì)面的交流).

6、 4.However，everycoinhastwosides，sodoestheInternet.Forexample，beinglostintheInternetmayaffectourstudyandwork(比如，沉溺于因特網(wǎng)也許會(huì)影響我們的學(xué)習(xí)和工作). 微技能(二)　增添與所寫信息相關(guān)的神態(tài)、動(dòng)作、心理描寫以及背景渲染等內(nèi)容 1.我有時(shí)去村西的小河游泳。 Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen. →Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthe

7、n.Thewaterintheriverwasveryclear.(背景渲染) →Weatherpermitting，Iwentswimmingintheriverofthewestofthevillagenowandthen.(相關(guān)背景) 2.我發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些不良行為。 Ifoundsomebadbehavior. →Ifoundsomebadbehavior.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall；somepeopleplayedsocceronthelawnandsomepeoplethrewrubbisheverywhere.(相關(guān)行為描述) 3.晚飯后，這位男

8、士走向了臥室。 Aftersupper，themanwenttohisbedroom. →Afterarichmeal，thefatmanslowlymadehiswaytohisbedroom.(神態(tài)、動(dòng)作) 題組過關(guān)2　根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 5.Consideringtheactivityisofgreatvalue/ismeaningful(考慮到這項(xiàng)活動(dòng)很有意義)，weintendtodesignauniformsuitedtoourownclass. 6.I’lltrymybesttomakeyourunclehappyhere.Iameagerlylookingforw

9、ardtohisvisittoourcity(我熱切地期盼著他來我們城市參觀). 7.Manyteenagersdon’tpayanyattentiontotheirhealth，especiallyduringtheholiday.TheyspendtoomuchtimewatchingTV(他們花費(fèi)太多的時(shí)間看電視)，playinggamesandchattingontheInternetallnight. 8.LookingbacktomystayinBritain，Ifeltveryhappyandsatisfied(我感到非常高興和滿意). 9.Inthesummervacat

10、ion，Iamlongingtoget/haveapart-timejob(我渴望得到一份兼職工作). 微技能(三)　增加相關(guān)信息的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容 1.我要和父母一起去超市購(gòu)物。 I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarket. →I’mgoingtodosomeshoppingwithmyparentsinthesupermarketandwon’tbebackuntilabout5∶00intheafternoon.(增加時(shí)間) 2.我已經(jīng)帶來了你讓我歸還的這兩本書。 Ihavetakenwithmethetwobo

11、oksyouaskedmetoreturn. →IhavetakenwithmethetwobooksyouaskedmetoreturntotheCityLibrary.(增加地點(diǎn)) 題組過關(guān)3　根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 10.YaoMing，whowasborninShanghaionSeptember12,1980(1980年9月12日出生于上海)，startedplayingfortheShanghaiSharksasateenager. 11.TheChineseSilkRoad，whichstartsfromtoday’sXi’anandfinallyfinishesatth

12、eeastcoastof(起源于今天的西安，并最后達(dá)到……的東海岸) theMediterranean，iswell-knowntotheworld. 12.TodayIpaidavisittooneofthegreatestcitiesinAsia，BeijinginChina(在亞洲，中國(guó)的北京). 13.Iwasattractedbythebeautyofthe city themoment/immediately/assoonas/directly(一……就……) Iarrivedhereat6o’clockinthemorningbyplane. 微技能(四)　適當(dāng)增加與所給信

13、息相關(guān)的原因、結(jié)果、條件、讓步、手段、目的、地點(diǎn)等內(nèi)容 1.假設(shè)你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友Henry最近來信詢問你高考后的暑假安排。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面要點(diǎn)寫一封回信，說明你的計(jì)劃，并簡(jiǎn)述理由。1.休息；2.讀書；3.參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。 (1)Ineedagoodrest.I’lldosomereading. →IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.Ofcourse，I’lldosomereadingforfun，andforknowledgeaswell.(因果關(guān)系) (2)I’lltakepartinsome

14、socialactivities. →IfIhavefreetime，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語) →Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivities.(條件狀語) →Ifpossible，I’lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothat/inorderthatIcanknowmoreaboutthesociety.(結(jié)果狀語) 2.Tracy來電話：咖啡屋(BoltonCoffee)見面取消。 Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn

15、’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffee. →Tracycalled，sayingthatshecouldn’tmeetyouatBoltonCoffeeasshehadsomethingimportanttodo.(原因狀語) 3.幫助鄰居的孩子們補(bǔ)習(xí)英語。 IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons. →IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy，theymaderapidprogressandtheirpar

16、entsthoughthighlyofme.(增添結(jié)果) 題組過關(guān)4　根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 14.TombSweepingDay，oneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals(傳統(tǒng)的中國(guó)節(jié)日之一)，usuallyfallsaroundApril5everyyeartohonorthedeadandsatisfytheirancestors. 15.Withtheglobalclimatebecomingwarmerandwarmer(伴隨著全球氣候變得越來越暖和)，ourearthisfacedwithgreatthreat. 16.Situated/Loc

17、atedinnortheast(坐落在東北部)，Beijingiswell-knownforitsculturalrelicswhichhavebeenthereforalonghistory. 17.Duringthisperiod，peoplewillgotocleanthegravesandpayrespecttotheirancestors，carryingfoodandfruit(帶上食物和水果). 18.Beingaseniorschoolstudent(作為一名高中生)，it’severyone’sdutytodosomethingtosaveourearth. 19.As

18、isknowntoall/Aseveryoneknows(眾所周知)，EarthHourisanactivitywhichaimsatsavingenergy. 微技能(五)　結(jié)尾適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，寫出個(gè)人感受、評(píng)價(jià)、希望愿景、倡議等 1.AlthoughIwasverytiredthissummerholiday，IfeltveryhappyforwhatIdid.(個(gè)人感受) 2.Ithinksuchactivitiesarenecessaryandmeaningful.(評(píng)價(jià)) 3.Inaword，ifshewouldliketolearnChinese，Ihopeshewilldoit

19、well.(愿景) 4.Asstudents，it’sourdutytoprotectourschoolenvironmentandmakeitclean.(倡議) 題組過關(guān)5　根據(jù)括號(hào)內(nèi)提示完成句子 20.Asaprofessionalbasketballplayer(作為一名專業(yè)的籃球運(yùn)動(dòng)員)，heisoneofChina’sbest-knownathletes. 21.IthinkBeijingiswellworthasecondvisit(非常值得再次參觀). 22.Inmyview，nomatterhow/howeverattractivetheInternetis(不管因

20、特網(wǎng)多么吸引人)，itshouldn’tseparateusfromourlovedones. 23.Wedrewaconclusionthroughtheexperiment(通過這個(gè)實(shí)驗(yàn)我們得出一個(gè)結(jié)論)：thetemperaturedoesn’tchangewheniceismeltingintowater. 24.Let’sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontributionstoourenvironment(盡力為我們的環(huán)境做出更多貢獻(xiàn)). 25.Therefore，weshoulds

21、pendtimewithourfamilies，enjoyingthetimewhenwearetogether(享受我們?cè)谝黄鸬臅r(shí)光). Ⅰ.按要求對(duì)下列句子進(jìn)行擴(kuò)充 1.每天要努力學(xué)習(xí)，為每一次考試做出仔細(xì)的計(jì)劃。(增加條件狀語) Studyhardeverydayandmakecarefulplansforeveryexam.Ifweareprepared，wewillnotfeelworried. 2.復(fù)旦大學(xué)位于上海。(增加which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句) FudanUniversityislocatedinShanghai，whichisaninternationa

22、lcitywhereIcangetalotofknowledgeandexperience. 3.不管我將面對(duì)什么樣的困難，我都不會(huì)屈服。(增加目的狀語) Torealizemydream，whateverchallengeIwillface，Iwillnevergivein. 4.我們應(yīng)該學(xué)會(huì)如何與他人相處。(增加具體信息說明) Weshouldlearnhowtogetalongwellwithothers.Forexample，weshouldrespectteachersandbefriendlywithclassmates. 5.一些學(xué)生非常擔(dān)心考試以至于晚上無法入睡。

23、(增加結(jié)果狀語) Somestudentsaresoworriedaboutexamsthattheycan’tfallasleepatnight.Asaresult，theyfeelsleepyinthedaytimeandcan’tconcentrateinclass. Ⅱ.請(qǐng)為下面的短文適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié) DearSam， TheCollegeEntranceExaminationlastsfortwodays.TheexamineesaretestedonChinese，math，scienceandarts.Wearephysicallyandmentallystresseddur

24、ingtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex. 參考范文　 DearSam， Thankyouforyourconcern.NowI’lltellyousomethingabouttheonce-a-yearCollegeEntranceExamination. Thereisnodoubtthattheexaminationisveryimportant.ItlastsfortwodaysfromJune7thto8th.TheexamineesaretestedonChineseandmathonthefirstday.Scienceandartsaretestedonthesecondday.Wearephysicallyandmentallystressedduringtheexaminationandthequestionsaredifficultandcomplex.Butwearefullofconfidencebecausewearewellprepared.Weallbelievethatthefruitsofoureffortswillbesweet. 6