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1、單元寫作
寫作五步成文(應用文)
[2018全國卷Ⅲ書面表達]假定你是李華,你的英國朋友Peter來信詢問你校學生體育運動情況。請給他回信,內(nèi)容包括:
1.學校的體育場館;
2.主要的運動項目;
3.你喜歡的項目。
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。
步驟一:審題構(gòu)思——分析透徹是前提
一、審題
1.確定體裁:本文為應用文(介紹學校的體育運動情況)。
2.確定人稱:本文的主要人稱為第一、三人稱。
3.確定時態(tài):以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。
二、構(gòu)思
第一段:表達心情。
第二段:介紹學校體育運動(體育場,開展的運動,自己喜歡的項目及原因)。
2、
第三段:客套語。
步驟二:精挑細選——核心詞匯想周全
1.hear_from 收到……的來信
2.a(chǎn)sk..._about 詢問……的情況
3.build_up 建成
4.become_a_landmark 成為地標
5.a(chǎn)_wide_range_of_sports 許多體育項目
6.enjoy_great_popularity 很受歡迎
7.be_interested_in 對……感興趣
8.give_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges
給我迎接挑戰(zhàn)的力量
步驟三:遣詞造句——由詞擴句雛形現(xiàn)
1.你在上一封信中詢問我們學
3、校體育運動的情況。(主謂賓狀)
You_asked_me_in_your_last_letter_about_the_physical_exercise_in_our_school.
2.下面的信息可能會給你一個粗略的概況。(主謂間賓直賓)
The_following_information_may_give_you_a_rough_sketch.
3.一個大型新的體育場建成了。(被動語態(tài))
A_big_new_stadium_has_been_built_up.
4.它成為我們學校的新地標。(主系表)
It_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_
4、school._
5.此外,隨著體育場的建立,可以開展許多體育運動。(被動語態(tài))
Moreover,_with_the_stadium_set_up,_a_wide_range_of_sports_events_are_able_to_be_held.
6.乒乓球、足球和賽跑很受歡迎。(主謂賓)
Ping-pong,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.
7.我對籃球感興趣。(主系表)
I'm_interested_in_basketball.
8.它給了我迎接生活中挑戰(zhàn)的力量。(主謂賓狀
5、)
It_has_been_giving_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges_in_my_life.
步驟四:斟酌打磨——句式升級造亮點
1.用and把第1、2句升級為并列句
You_asked_me_in_your_last_letter_about_the_physical_exercise_in_our_school_and_the_following_information_may_give_you_a_rough_sketch.
2.用which把第3、4句升級為含定語從句的復合句
A_big_new_stadium_has_b
6、een_built_up,_which_has_become_the_new_landmark_in_our_school.
3.用of which把第5、6句升級為含非限制性定語從句的復合句
Moreover,_with_the_stadium_set_up,_a_wide_range_of_sports_events_are_able_to_be_held,_of_which_ping-pong,_football_as_well_as_running_competitions_enjoy_great_popularity.
4.用since把第7、8句升級為含原因狀語從句的復合句
7、
I'm_interested_in_basketball_since_it_has_been_giving_me_strength_to_confront_the_challenges_in_my_life.
步驟五:連句成文——邏輯銜接連成篇(可能會用到to begin with, moreover, as for me, all in all等詞語)
Dear Peter,
I am very delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in ou
8、r school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a big new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I'm interested in basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
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