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1、菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I文體透析日記一般記錄某一天發(fā)生的事件，或者是自己感受最深的一件事，如一節(jié)課、一次郊游活動、一場晚會、一場體育比賽等。也可是觀看某場電影、電視劇或閱讀某一篇文章后的體會等。因為考試時日記的格式往往都會給出，因此我們就結(jié)合考試實際重點關注日記正文寫作時應注意的問題：第三節(jié)應用文第三節(jié)應用文(3)日記日記菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I1時態(tài)特征：由于日記所記述的事情已經(jīng)發(fā)生，因此多用一般過去時態(tài)。2主題要突出。整篇日記要圍繞一個主題來展開。切忌面面俱到，記流水賬。因此，要根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容精心組織語言。3語言

2、表達要貼切。寫日記時，遣詞造句要符合語法和英語習慣表達。4注意結(jié)構的完整性。在結(jié)尾要有結(jié)束語，用自己的感想或體會對前面的內(nèi)容作總結(jié)。菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I常用句型1開頭常用語Today is a weekend and it is the traditional Chinese festivalthe Midautumn Festival.今天是周末，也是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日中秋節(jié)。Today I showed some foreign friends around our city.今天我?guī)ьI外國朋友參觀了我們的城市。This morning our te

3、acher told us something about the Hope Project in class.今天早晨，老師在課堂上向我們講了一些關于希望工程的事。 菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I2結(jié)尾常用語We did have a wonderful time today.我們今天真的度過了美好的一天。I felt very happy today because Ive done a good deed.我今天感到非常高興，因為我做了一件好事。We felt tired but happy.我們感到很累，但是很幸福。You cant imagine h

4、ow disappointed I was today.你想象不到我今天是多么失望。菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 IWhat a good trip we had today！Ill never forget it.我們今天旅途非常愉快，我將永遠不會忘記。菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I寫作任務(2014廈門外國語學校高三模擬)假設今天我校組織了消防演習。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英語日記，講述整個演習過程，并談談自己的感想。菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一

5、輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。2可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：消防演習fire drill；預防措施precaution measuresThis morning，our school held a fire drill._ _ _ 菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I學生習作This_morning，our_school_held_a_fire_drill.We were having a class when the fire alarm was ringing.Immediately the tea

6、cher instructed us to leave the classroom in order.Soon we found ourselves surrounded by smoke everywhere.We covered our mouth with handkerchiefs，and we ran downstairs hurriedly to the playground as planned.After the fire drill we came back to the classroom and made a review of the things to do in t

7、he critical moment.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 IThrough this fire drill，I come to realize the importance of precaution measures against a disaster.Our school not only concern itself about students academic performance，but also include such drill as part of its education，improving students surviva

8、l skills.In addition to，I think the success of this fire drill is because of good teamwork and coordination.I firmly believe that these two qualities we have learned from this fire drill will be beneficial to us and will play a better role in our future.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 ITo conclude，th

9、is fire drill proves a worthy experience to me.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I教師閱卷本句時態(tài)使用錯誤。如果把這部分換成with的復合結(jié)構，表達效果會更好。此處句式缺少變化，可以考慮倒裝句式的使用。此處連接詞使用錯誤。該句表達啰嗦?？蓢L試使用其他詞匯來表達。單詞使用不恰當。菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I妙筆生花1改正句中的時態(tài)。_2用with復合結(jié)構改寫句。_3用倒裝句式改寫句。_ 4改正中的錯誤。_ 菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I5用適當?shù)膯卧~、

10、句式替換句。_6改正中的錯誤。_菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I范文背誦This_morning，our_school_held_a_fire_drill.We were having a class when the fire alarm rang.Immediately the teacher instructed us to leave the classroom in order.Soon we found ourselves surrounded by smoke everywhere.With our mouth covered with handk

11、erchiefs，we ran downstairs hurriedly to the playground as planned.After the fire drill we came back to the classroom and made a review of the things to do in the critical moment.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 IThrough this fire drill，I come to realize the importance of precaution measures against a

12、disaster.Not only does school concern itself about students academic performance，but also include such drill as part of its education，improving students survival skills.In addition，I owe the success of this fire drill to good teamwork and coordination.I firmly believe that these two qualities we hav

13、e learned from this fire drill will be beneficial to us and will play a better role in our future.To conclude，this fire drill proves a worthwhile experience to me.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I(2014海淀區(qū)高三測試)假設你是紅星中學高三(1)班的學生李華。下面四幅圖描述了上周一你騎自行車上學路上發(fā)生的一件事情。請根據(jù)圖片的先后順序，將這件事用英文以日記形式記述下來。注意：1.日記的開頭已為你寫好。

14、2詞數(shù)不少于60。參考詞匯：剮蹭scratch菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 IMonday，October 28 FineThis morning，_ _ _ _ 菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 I【參考范文】Monday，October_28FineThis_morning，I went to school by bicycle as usual.As I was listening to my favourite music with a headphone on

15、my head，I didnt notice a car parked on the roadside.I scratched the car and left a scar on it.Thinking that I would have classes，I left a note with my name and address to let the driver know what happened.菜菜 單單高三一輪總復習英語高三一輪總復習英語 新課標新課標 ILater in the afternoon，while we were having a class meeting，our headmaster brought a stranger to our class.He was the car owner.He explained to the class the whole story and praised me.Both my teacher and classmates were impressed and proud of my honesty.I think honesty should be valued most.