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1、題目要求題目要求(2012溫州模擬溫州模擬) 據(jù)一項調查顯示,有據(jù)一項調查顯示,有85.8%的中學生說自己的中學生說自己的字不好看,而他們又不想改善它,其理由有很大差別。請的字不好看,而他們又不想改善它,其理由有很大差別。請根據(jù)下圖內容用英語寫一篇短文,說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表看法。根據(jù)下圖內容用英語寫一篇短文,說明該現(xiàn)象并發(fā)表看法。注意:詞數(shù)注意:詞數(shù)100120(開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù))。 Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and
2、 less attention to their handwriting. _技法指導技法指導 圖表作文要求學生首先看懂圖表旨在展示的內容,然圖表作文要求學生首先看懂圖表旨在展示的內容,然后準確清晰地進行分析、描述和概括,最后得出合乎情理后準確清晰地進行分析、描述和概括,最后得出合乎情理的結論。寫圖表作文的一般步驟如下:的結論。寫圖表作文的一般步驟如下: 1開頭部分:圖表作文的首段必須描寫圖表,這里開頭部分:圖表作文的首段必須描寫圖表,這里應該包括趨勢描寫和數(shù)據(jù)支持。應該包括趨勢描寫和數(shù)據(jù)支持。 2主題段落:在這一部分,考生應該根據(jù)圖表所提供主題段落:在這一部分,考生應該根據(jù)圖表所提供的信息進
3、行分析,闡述自己的觀點和理由。的信息進行分析,闡述自己的觀點和理由。, 3結尾部分:考生可以總結全文,加深讀者的印象;結尾部分:考生可以總結全文,加深讀者的印象;也可以發(fā)出號召,喚起讀者的共鳴;還可以表示作者的信也可以發(fā)出號召,喚起讀者的共鳴;還可以表示作者的信念,增強文章的感染力;有時,也可以提出問題,啟發(fā)讀念,增強文章的感染力;有時,也可以提出問題,啟發(fā)讀者思考。者思考。 無論怎樣,考生都應該注意既要做到與開頭呼應又要無論怎樣,考生都應該注意既要做到與開頭呼應又要概括全文,使讀者有一個統(tǒng)一完整的概念。概括全文,使讀者有一個統(tǒng)一完整的概念。寫圖表作文時,考生還應注意以下幾個方面:寫圖表作文時
4、,考生還應注意以下幾個方面: 1圖表往往提供大量數(shù)據(jù),應仔細觀察分析,從中選圖表往往提供大量數(shù)據(jù),應仔細觀察分析,從中選擇有效信息進行描述。擇有效信息進行描述。 2充分利用圖表中提供的文字或說明。同樣,圖表中充分利用圖表中提供的文字或說明。同樣,圖表中沒有的信息不能憑主觀想象任意捏造。沒有的信息不能憑主觀想象任意捏造。 3說明、描述圖表時應該注意動詞時態(tài),屬于過去發(fā)說明、描述圖表時應該注意動詞時態(tài),屬于過去發(fā)生的應該用一般過去時,屬于經(jīng)常發(fā)生的應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。生的應該用一般過去時,屬于經(jīng)常發(fā)生的應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。 4句子結構要力求有變化,不要總是一個句型。句子結構要力求有變化,不要總是一個句
5、型。第一步構建框架,清晰行文第一步構建框架,清晰行文謀篇布局謀篇布局黃金模板黃金模板 The chart gives us an overall picture of the _(圖表主題圖表主題). The first thing we notice is that _(圖表最大特點圖表最大特點). This means that as _, _(進一步說明進一步說明) We can see from the statistics given that _(圖表圖表細節(jié)一細節(jié)一). After _(細節(jié)一中的第一變化細節(jié)一中的第一變化), the _(緊跟著的變化緊跟著的變化). The f
6、igures also tell us that _(圖圖表細節(jié)二表細節(jié)二). _(數(shù)據(jù)位置,如數(shù)據(jù)位置,如In the second column), we can see that _ accounts for _(進一步描進一步描述述) Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that _(結論結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned, is that _(給出原因給出原因). /It is high time that we _(發(fā)出倡議發(fā)出倡議)第二步打造
7、亮句,增色文章第二步打造亮句,增色文章1根據(jù)最近的一項調查,大約根據(jù)最近的一項調查,大約85.8%的中學生認為他們的的中學生認為他們的字不好看。字不好看。 A recent survey shows that about 85.8 percent of middle school students hold the idea that their handwriting is poor. According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting
8、is poor. 2漂亮整潔的書法是有益的,尤其對中學生來說。漂亮整潔的書法是有益的,尤其對中學生來說。 Its beneficial for students, especially for middle school students, to have beautiful and neat handwriting. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. 第三步串句成文,保證流暢第三步串句成文,保證流暢 Nowadays, with the growing po
9、pularity of computers, more and more people are paying less and less attention to their handwriting., According to a recent survey, about 85.8 percent of middle school students think that their handwriting is poor. Yet for various reasons, many students dont want to improve their handwriting. 51.5 p
10、ercent of them think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting, and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practice. 10.9 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless. The rest have other
11、reasons. As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.(2011北京東城區(qū)模擬北京東城區(qū)模擬)近日,某報對我市幾所小學的學生近日,某報對我市幾所小學的學生展開了一項關于展開了一項關于“什么樣的人可以當班長
12、什么樣的人可以當班長”的調查。請根的調查。請根據(jù)下面的圖表寫一篇英語短文,介紹調查結果并談談你認據(jù)下面的圖表寫一篇英語短文,介紹調查結果并談談你認為什么樣的人可以當班長。為什么樣的人可以當班長。注意:注意:1開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。開頭已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。2詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于60。 The primary school students have different opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor. _ _ _參考范文:參考范文: The primary school students have diffe
13、rent opinions on what kind of person can become a monitor. We can see from the pie chart that about 4.41% of the students believe that those who have good relationship with others are likely to become a monitor. More students around 6%, however, think that the most important character of a monitor i
14、s having responsibility. Interestingly, there are about 11.04% considering that a monitor should have a good look while 11.75% of them suppose that teachers usually appoint their favourite students as monitors. The majority of students, about 67% believe that only when they do well in their studies
15、can they have the chance to become a monitor. On the one hand, I think, being a monitor requires high grades in study so that you can set a good example to the fellow students. On the other hand, being responsible is of equal importance to studying well. You need to be a good assistant to your teacher to help deal with some daily affairs in class, and sometimes when the headteacher is away, you are to be in charge of the class.