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1、關(guān)于影評(píng)
1.寫(xiě)作步驟:定基調(diào)—列提綱、寫(xiě)句子—巧銜接—添佳句—成篇章
2.寫(xiě)作任務(wù):今天英語(yǔ)課上老師讓你們觀看了Zootopia?(《瘋狂動(dòng)物城》)這部電影,并讓你們對(duì)這部電影進(jìn)行評(píng)論,請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文來(lái)完成你的影評(píng)。
思路點(diǎn)撥:
1.?定基調(diào)
體裁:議論文
時(shí)態(tài):寫(xiě)影評(píng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
人稱(chēng):寫(xiě)故事梗概時(shí)可用第三人稱(chēng),表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)可用第一人稱(chēng)。
2.?列提綱、寫(xiě)句子
列提綱
寫(xiě)句子
電影名稱(chēng)
及類(lèi)型
Zootopia?is (1)___________(一部有教育意義且激動(dòng)人心的動(dòng)畫(huà)片).
故事梗概
◆The movie is about a rabbit,
2、Judy. Judy (2)___________(想成為) the first rabbit police officer when she is a kid although all the other animals think it is impossible (不可能的). However, through her? hard work, (3)___________(她的夢(mèng)想實(shí)現(xiàn)了).
◆When a strange (奇怪的) thing happens in the city of Zootopia, Judy decides to solve (處理) the diffic
3、ult case (案件) (4)___________(盡管她只有48小時(shí)來(lái)完成). With the help of Nick, Judy (5)___________(查明) the truth (真相) of the case.
◆(6)___________(她變得非常出名) in the city.
自己的觀點(diǎn)
I like the movie because it tells us that we should have our dreams and work hard for them.
3.?巧銜接
文中寫(xiě)故事梗概時(shí)可以用一些表示時(shí)間過(guò)渡的詞語(yǔ)來(lái)體現(xiàn)故事的脈絡(luò),比如
4、when, later, at last等,這些詞語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用使文章銜接自然、流暢。
4.?添佳句
As the lyrics of this movie’s theme song say, I won’t give up no I won’t give in. Till I reach the end and then I’ll start again.
正如電影主題曲的歌詞所說(shuō):我絕不會(huì)屈服,絕不會(huì)放棄。直到我抵達(dá)終點(diǎn),我會(huì)重新出發(fā)。
5.?成篇章
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參考答案
2.?列提綱、寫(xiě)句子
(1) an educational and exciting cartoon movie
(2) wants to be? (3
6、) her dream comes true
(4) although she only has 48 hours to finish it
(5) finds out? (6) She becomes very famous
5.?成篇章
Zootopia?is an educational and exciting cartoon movie. It is about a rabbit, Judy. Judy wants to be the first rabbit police officer?when?she is a kid although all the other an
7、imals think it is impossible. However, through her hard work, her dream comes true.?Later?when a strange thing happens in the city of Zootopia, Judy decides to solve the difficult case although she only has 48 hours to finish it. With the help of Nick, Judy finds out the truth of the case.?At last?she becomes very famous in the city.
I like the movie because it tells us that we should have our dreams and work hard for them. As the lyrics of this movie’s theme song say, I won’t give up no I won’t give in. Till I reach the end and then I’ll start again
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