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1、短文改錯專練(二) Test 1 [2019·成都第三次診斷] Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my achievement and the voluntary work I have done. After complete the online admission process, I took a deep breathe and dreamed about

2、 my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I total got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room but thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn nothing from the experience even though those rejections were mad

3、e me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. For this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me. 答案與解析： Applying for a foreign university is a huge project. Here is my experience. I did voluntary work in Grade One. I listed all of my and the voluntary work I done.

4、 After the online admission process, I took a deep and dreamed about my dream college. However, except offer from the University of California, San Diego (UCSD), I got eight rejections. One day, I locked myself in my room thought about what I had done. Finally I understood that I could learn f

5、rom the experience even though those rejections were made me sad. I accepted the UCSD's offer and adjusted myself quickly. this attitude, everything I saw of UCSD thrilled me. ①achievement改為achievements　考查名詞。根據(jù)該句中的“all of”可知，這里表示不止一項(xiàng)成就，故要用名詞復(fù)數(shù)。 ②have改為had　考查動詞。根據(jù)本句中的“l(fā)isted”可知，這里講述的是過去的經(jīng)歷，此處表示截止到

6、過去這個時間點(diǎn)我已經(jīng)做的志愿者工作，故要用過去完成時。 ③complete改為completing　考查非謂語動詞。介詞After后面要用動名詞，故應(yīng)改為completing。 ④breathe改為breath　考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的冠詞a和形容詞deep可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞，take a deep breath固定短語“深吸一口氣”。 ⑤except后加an/the　考查冠詞。offer為可數(shù)名詞，故前面要用限定詞修飾；此處可表泛指，且offer的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故用an；也可表特指，故用the。 ⑥total改為totally　考查副詞。修飾動詞got要用副詞形式。 ⑦but改為

7、and　考查連詞?！拔覍⒆约烘i在房間里”和“思考我所做的一切”之間不存在轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，而是順承關(guān)系，故要用and。 ⑧nothing改為something　考查代詞。根據(jù)句中的“even though”并結(jié)合語境可知，雖然之前被拒絕讓“我”很傷心，但是“我”也從中學(xué)到了一些東西，故要用something。 ⑨刪除made前的were　考查語態(tài)。此處表示那些拒絕讓我傷心，應(yīng)用主動語態(tài)。 ⑩For改為With　考查介詞。此處表示“帶著這樣一種態(tài)度”，故應(yīng)用介詞With。 Test 2 [2019·鄭州高三第一次質(zhì)量預(yù)測] This summer, I visited Hangzho

8、u, and this journey had impressed me deeply. Being a capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of place of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water seem to melt into the sky by the distance. Besides, there are se

9、veral museums locating in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of deliciously local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, but they are working hard make the city more beautiful. What attractive a

10、nd inviting Hangzhou is! 答案與解析： This summer, I visited Hangzhou, and this journey had impressed me deeply. Being capital of Zhejiang Province, Hangzhou lies in the southeast of China. There are a lot of of interest. Among them the West Lake is the best-known attraction, where water

11、 to melt into the sky the distance. Besides, there are several museums in Hangzhou that show its unique culture. What's more, you can enjoy many kinds of local food such as West Lake Fish in Vinegar Sauce and Dongpo Pork. The people there are friendly and kind, they are working hard make the ci

12、ty more beautiful. attractive and inviting Hangzhou is! ①刪除had　考查時態(tài)。had done為過去完成時，表示“過去的過去”。但在此句中，visited先發(fā)生，impressed后發(fā)生，因此用一般過去時，had多余，故刪除。 ②a改為the　考查冠詞。杭州為浙江省的省會，此處表示特指，故把a(bǔ)改為the。 ③place改為places　考查名詞。place為可數(shù)名詞，且根據(jù)該句中的“a lot of”可知，此處應(yīng)用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。 ④seem改為seems　考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。根據(jù)該句中的“is”可知，此處敘述一般的情況，應(yīng)用一

13、般現(xiàn)在時；該從句的主語是water，是不可數(shù)名詞，故用seems。 ⑤by改為in　考查介詞。in the distance固定短語“在遠(yuǎn)處，在遠(yuǎn)方”，故把by改為in。 ⑥locating改為located　考查非謂語動詞。be located in固定短語“位于……”，此處省略了be動詞，故用過去分詞短語作后置定語。 ⑦deliciously改為delicious　考查形容詞。根據(jù)語境及該句中的“l(fā)ocal food”，可知此處應(yīng)用形容詞delicious。 ⑧but改為and　考查連詞。此處前面意為“這里的人友好、善良”，此處后面意為“他們正在努力工作以使這座城市更美麗”，根據(jù)句

14、意可知，前后句之間為并列關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，因此把but改為and。 ⑨hard后加to　考查非謂語動詞。參見上題解析。此處應(yīng)用動詞不定式作目的狀語，故在hard后加to。 ⑩What改為How　考查感嘆句。根據(jù)該句中的“attractive and inviting”以及“How＋adj.＋主語＋謂語”結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處應(yīng)用How來引導(dǎo)該感嘆句。 Test 3 [2019·福建省質(zhì)量檢查] As everybody know, parents are worried too much about their child, especially when the young m

15、eet with challenges. So do my parents. They are even more nervous than I when a important test is coming. I have been thinking about talked to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve them. When they are convincing that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, the

16、y surely won't feel worried. Please keep in mind that our parents love us unconditional. I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents. 答案與解析： As everybody ， parents are worried too much about their ， especially when the young meet with challenges. So

17、 my parents. They are even more nervous than I when important test is coming. I have been thinking about to them. I'll let them know I have a goal and will work hard to achieve . When they are that I'll be responsible for that what I should do, they surely won't feel worried. Please keep in min

18、d that our parents love us . I hope my thought can be helpful to you in dealing the relationship with your parents. ①know改為knows　考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。句意：眾所周知，父母太擔(dān)心他們的孩子了，尤其是當(dāng)孩子遇到挑戰(zhàn)的時候。該句陳述的是客觀情況，故用一般現(xiàn)在時；主語為everybody，為第三人稱單數(shù)，故謂語動詞用單數(shù)。 ②child改為children　考查名詞。該處表示“他們的孩子”， child為可數(shù)名詞，由該句中的“parents”和“their”可知，該處應(yīng)

19、用復(fù)數(shù)形式children。 ③do改為are　考查倒裝句。句意：我的父母也是如此。此處表示前一句話中的謂語所說明的情況也適用于本句主語；根據(jù)前一句中的“are worried”可知，該處應(yīng)用are。 ④a改為an　考查冠詞。該處泛指“一場重要的考試”，故用不定冠詞；important的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，故用不定冠詞an。 ⑤talked改為talking　考查非謂語動詞。about為介詞，后接動名詞talking作賓語。 ⑥them改為it　考查代詞。句意：“我”會讓他們知道“我”有一個目標(biāo)并且會努力地去實(shí)現(xiàn)它。此處代指前面的“a goal”，為單數(shù)，故用it。 ⑦convinc

20、ing改為convinced　考查固定用法。句意：當(dāng)他們確信“我”會對“我”應(yīng)該做的事情負(fù)責(zé)時，他們想必不會感到擔(dān)心。be convinced that...固定短語“確信……”。 ⑧刪除that　考查賓語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，該處為賓語從句，作介詞for的賓語，連接詞what在從句中作do的賓語，句子成分完整，that多余，故刪除。 ⑨unconditional改為unconditionally　考查副詞。一般用副詞修飾動詞，此處修飾動詞love，故用副詞形式unconditionally。 ⑩dealing后加with　考查介詞。句意：我希望我的想法能對你處理與父母之間的關(guān)系有所幫

21、助。deal with固定短語“處理，應(yīng)付”。 Test 4 [2019·昆明質(zhì)量檢測] Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students choose to work as either cashiers in a store and waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 student to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a

22、photo studio because of I love taking photos. With the help of a advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed practically skills which are necessary for them to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned are to improve myself afte

23、r I get my dream job. 答案與解析： Our school encouraged us to experience some future careers last vacation. Some students to work as either cashiers in a store waiters at a restaurant. I was one of the 500 to join in the activity. I decided be an assistant in a photo studio because of I love

24、 taking photos. With the help of advanced photographer in the studio, I opened my imagination in my daily work. I also developed skills which are necessary for to face future challenges. The most important thing I've learned to improve myself I get my dream job. ①choose改為chose　考查時態(tài)。根據(jù)上文中的“l(fā)ast

25、 vacation”可知，此處描述的情況發(fā)生在過去，應(yīng)用一般過去時。 ②and改為or　考查連詞。句意：一些學(xué)生選擇當(dāng)商店的收銀員或者餐館的服務(wù)員。either... or...固定短語“或者……或者……”。 ③student改為students　考查名詞。根據(jù)前面的“one of the 500”可知，此處應(yīng)用名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。 ④decided后加to　考查非謂語動詞。decide to do sth.固定短語“決定做某事”。 ⑤刪除of　考查連詞。此處應(yīng)用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，故刪除of。because of是介詞短語，后一般跟名詞、代詞等。 ⑥a改為an　考查冠詞。a

26、dvanced的發(fā)音以元音音素開頭，所以用冠詞an。 ⑦practically改為practical　考查形容詞。名詞前面應(yīng)用形容詞修飾，故用practical。 ⑧them改為me　考查代詞。句意：我也培養(yǎng)了一些實(shí)用的技能，這些技能對我面對未來的挑戰(zhàn)來說是必要的。根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)把them改為me。 ⑨are改為is　考查時態(tài)和主謂一致。此處為一般性描述，且主語The most important thing為第三人稱單數(shù)，故將are改為is。 ⑩after改為before/until　考查狀語從句。此處表示在“我”找到理想的工作之前/直到“我”找到理想的工作。根據(jù)句意可知，應(yīng)將after改為before/until。 - 7 -