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六、讀寫任務(wù)類—— 說明文
典例
請閱讀下面文字及圖表,并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。
1.The other day,a netizen(網(wǎng)民) shared a photo on Sina Weibo.It was about an old lady standing in front of a car that was on a bicycle lane,and insisting that it leave the track.The photo drew about 7,000 comments on the social media platform.D
2、espite the thumbs-up(點贊) given to the old lady,some argued that attention should be paid to our heavy road traffic.
2.Some riders of e-bikes and bicycles come and go in all directions,ignoring traffic lights and other vehicles.Such rude riding contributes to the disorder of traffic.Thus the avoidab
3、le road accidents become unavoidable.
寫作內(nèi)容
1.用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容;
2.結(jié)合上述信息,簡要分析導致交通問題的主要原因;
3.根據(jù)你的分析,從社會規(guī)范(rules and regulations)和個人行為兩方面談?wù)勀愕玫降膯⑹?不少于兩點)。
評分標準
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當。
滿分作文
The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten peopl
4、e’s lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples.
Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.What’s worse,som
5、e drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.
In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society.It
6、 is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
閱卷老師點評
1.本文在高級詞匯的使用,過渡詞句的運用,以及句式結(jié)構(gòu)的多樣化等方面做得非常到位。要點齊全,層次分明,過渡自然,結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。
2.范文嚴格按照“三步走”的格局:第一段用30詞(不含標點)概括了所給材料,得益于使用了not only...but also...這一經(jīng)典句型。
第二段分析了導致交
7、通問題的原因,使用了give rise to,large-scale construction of,the increasing number of,(be) vital to等高級詞匯,同時what’s worse銜接詞的恰當使用使該段條理清晰。
3.第三段句型多樣,使用了without虛擬語氣,it is...that...強調(diào)句型,it is one’s duty to do sth.等句型,為文章增色不少。
一、說明文的概括技巧
說明文通常會有明確的主題句,先抓住關(guān)鍵詞,并根據(jù)各段落的主題,有序地組織語言,完整表達出文章的中心內(nèi)容。如果是分析型說明文,概括時要找出文章所
8、說明的現(xiàn)象、產(chǎn)生該現(xiàn)象的原因及解決問題的方法或建議,然后用自己的話重組信息點。概括時要找出:
1.文章說明的是什么現(xiàn)象?
2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因是什么?
3.解決這種現(xiàn)象或問題的措施或建議是什么?
二、說明文讀寫任務(wù)類常用句型
1.This article deals with/discusses/analyzes/strongly emphasizes the impact of...
2.This article not only describes...but also suggests...
3.This article compares the disadvantage
9、s/benefits of...and summarizes key findings...
4.This article gives an account of/provides an analysis of/provides a method of...
5.This article shows/tells us that...
6.The author finds it necessary to.../The purpose of the report is to show that...
7.The author holds the idea that...,giving it
10、 an example of sb.who...
8.The author strongly emphasizes the benefits of getting up early such as...
9.This article points out the common phenomenon,which...(補充解釋)
(2018·南通一模)
Xue Zhaofeng,a professor from Peking University,reportedly has more than 170,000 subscribers to his online teaching c
11、ourse and could be making about 35 million yuan (5.3 million) a year.Xue is only one among the hundreds of online teachers making millions of yuan a month.According to iResearch,an agency specializing in Internet data collection,the online education market was worth 156 billion yuan by the end of la
12、st year,and it is expected to reach 260 billion yuan by 2019.
Online education has also found mention in this year’s Central Government Work Report,which Premier Li Keqiang delivered to the annual National People’s Congress.We can thus conclude that online education not only has huge economic poten
13、tial,but it also enjoys government support.
Online education is not without problems,though.Some online “educators” are extremely popular yet they hardly teach students anything useful.Worse,there is hardly any supervision of online education agencies.A China Central TV report on Nov 17 said quite
14、a high percentage of such agencies are being operated without the education bureaus’ acknowledgement.
寫作內(nèi)容
1.用約30個單詞寫出上文概要;
2.用約120個單詞闡述網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程流行的原因以及你對網(wǎng)絡(luò)課程健康發(fā)展的建議。
寫作要求
1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;
2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱;
3.不必寫標題。
評分標準
內(nèi)容完整,語言規(guī)范,語篇連貫,詞數(shù)適當。
參考范文
With the availability of rich educational r
15、esources,online education is becoming increasingly popular,bringing online teachers and agencies a large fortune.However,online education has caused some problems worth paying attention to.
There are many reasons accounting for its popularity.Nowadays,Chinese parents attach great importance to educ
16、ation,willing to pay for extra courses to ensure their children’s academic success.Besides,it is convenient for students to get access to online courses and follow their own pace of study.Thus online education also helps people save time and money.
From my point of view,online education is a wise o
17、ption,but essential measures should be taken to guarantee its healthy development.Education authorities should strictly regulate the national standards.Moreover,online teachers and agencies are expected to offer quality education.Above all,students should realize,no matter how useful online education is,it cannot completely replace school education.
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