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課時15 書面表達（三）-道歉信 Ⅰ.短文改錯 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)畫掉。 修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。 注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。 What does the Internet bring us？ There is no doubt that the Internet changed our life since it came into use. People can surf the Internet for any information they need in a short time without consume large amounts of time in the library. Besides， it is convenient to communicating with others via the Internet. However， the Internet also has some disadvantage. For one thing， there is much information that are not good for children and teenagers. For another， many students spend too much time play games online， that not only influences their studies but also harms their health. In my view， we should make a proper use of the Internet. It is of great important for us to separate good plants and wild weeds. 答案： What does the Internet bring us? There is no doubt that the Internet changed our life since it came into use. People can surf the Internet for any information they need in a short time without large amounts of time in the library. Besides, it is convenient to with others via the Internet. However, the Internet also has some . For one thing, there is much information that not good for children and teenagers. For another, many students spend too much time games online, not only influences their studies but also harms their health. In my view, we should make proper use of the Internet. It is of great for us to separate good plants wild weeds. Ⅱ.書面表達 假如你是李華，你看到“International Friendship Club”所做的廣告后加入了該俱樂部，但他們并沒履行相關(guān)承諾。請用英語寫信給主辦方，要求解釋以下承諾： 1.退還交友需要的照片； 2.兩周內(nèi)提供六個不同國家的筆友信息； 3.活動不收取任何費用。 注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右； 2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。 Dear Sir/Madam， I am writing to complain about the service I have received from your International Friendship Club. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours faithfully， Li Hua [參考范文] Dear Sir/Madam， I am writing to complain about the service I have received from your International Friendship Club. I joined your club a month ago， and you have not offered me the things you promised in your advertisement. You said that you would return photographs immediately， but I am still waiting for them after one month. In addition， you said that you would send me the details of penfriends in 6 different countries within 2 weeks. Now four weeks have passed and I have only received 2 names and letters. Finally， to make matters worse， you said this was a free service to students， but I received a bill of ￡20 last week， which I do not think I should pay. I am very disappointed with your service and would like you to explain the problems immediately. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours_faithfully， Li_Hua 階段回顧(規(guī)范練十一～十五) [單詞積累] 1.interactive adj.　　　　 互動的 2.accommodation n. 住宿 3.certificate n.& v. 證書；發(fā)證書 4.choke v. 哽咽 5.enterprise n. 企業(yè) 6.partially adv. 部分地 7.leisurely adj.& adv. 從容的(地) 8.cherish v. 珍惜 9.efficient adj. 有效率的 10.sympathetic adj. 有同情心的 11.ritual adj. 禮節(jié)性的 n.典禮 12.establish v. 建立 13.release v.& n. 發(fā)布；發(fā)行 14.restrain v. 抑制；約束 15.stylish adj. 時髦的；流行的 16.stretch v.& n. 伸展 17.destruction n. 破壞 18.generously adv. 慷慨地 19.existence n. 存在 20.complain v. 抱怨 [短語整理] 1.leave out 遺漏；省略 2.in charge of 掌管 3.account for 占；說明(原因、理由等) 4.go through 經(jīng)歷 5.well off 小康生活 6.make sense 有意義 7.pull over 停下(車) 8.be meant for sb. 命中注定(成為)…… 9.bring out 出版；取出 10.make for 朝……走去；有利于…… [難句分析] 1.Were here to provide the support you need every step of the way， from preparing your legal work visa to airport pickup. [分析]　這是一個復(fù)合句。to provide為不定式作目的狀語；you need為定語從句，修飾support； every step of the way為名詞短語作狀語；preparing...為動名詞短語作賓語。 [翻譯]　我們?yōu)槟闾峁┠闼璧拿恳徊街С?，從準備你的合法工作簽證到去機場迎接。 2.She glanced at Hannah and， confident the child was fully engaged in the TV， slipped out quickly to use the bathroom. [分析]　本句是復(fù)合句。主句中and連接兩個并列的謂語glanced和slipped； confident the child was fully engaged in the TV是形容詞短語作狀語，confident后面跟了一個省略了that的賓語從句；to use the bathroom是目的狀語。 [翻譯]　她瞟了一眼Hannah，相信孩子完全沉迷于電視節(jié)目中后就快速地溜出去上廁所了。 3.Tourism products with agricultural features will be developed on 10 square kilometers of land in Zhoupu town， Pudong New District， which is next to the Shanghai International Tourism and Resorts Zone. [分析]　句中的which is next to the Shanghai International Tourism and Resorts Zone是非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞10 square kilometers of land。 [翻譯]　浦東新區(qū)周浦鎮(zhèn)有10平方千米的土地將被用來開發(fā)具有農(nóng)業(yè)特色的旅游產(chǎn)品，它緊挨著上海國際旅游度假區(qū)。 4.Nutritionists who study what is called “the French paradox”—meaning the fact that French people have low obesity rates despite their diet containing lots of “unhealthy” ingredients such as eggs and butter—partially account for this circumstance by the fact that many French people use fresh ingredients. [分析]　本句主句主語是Nutritionists，其謂語是account for，而this circumstance作賓語。who study what is called “the French paradox”是定語從句，修飾Nutritionists，該定語從句中又包含一個what引導(dǎo)的賓語從句；meaning... such as eggs and butter相當于同位語，解釋說明“the French paradox”的內(nèi)容。兩個fact之后的從句分別作它們的同位語。 [翻譯]　研究被稱為“法國悖論”——即雖然法國人的飲食含有大量不利于健康的雞蛋、黃油等食材，但法國人的肥胖率卻很低——營養(yǎng)學(xué)家通過許多法國人使用新鮮食材這一事實部分地解釋了這種情況。 5.Dorris “Dee Dee” Moore， who authorities say befriended him after his lottery win， was found guilty of first degree murder in 2012. [分析]　這是一個復(fù)合句。who引導(dǎo)定語從句，authorities say為插入語；guilty為形容詞作主語補足語。 [翻譯]　當局稱在他中獎后和他成為朋友的Dorris “Dee Dee” Moore在2012年被判了一級謀殺罪。 6.I found the owners had just bought the house themselves and were decorating it， hoping to find the perfect renters. [分析]　本句為復(fù)合句。found后接省略了引導(dǎo)詞that的賓語從句；hoping...為現(xiàn)在分詞短語作狀語。 [翻譯]　我發(fā)現(xiàn)房主剛剛買下這棟房子，而且他們正在裝修它，希望找到理想的租賃者。 7.Moreover， among the kids who did become nearsighted during the study， the degree to which their eyesight worsened was slightly smaller among those who spent more time outdoors. [分析]　本句為主從復(fù)合句。句中兩個who均引導(dǎo)定語從句，分別修飾the kids和those； to which也引導(dǎo)定語從句，修飾the degree。 [翻譯]　而且，在研究期間患近視的孩子當中，那些參加戶外活動更多一些的孩子的視力的惡化程度略小一些。