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1、人之常情作文人之常情 　　危難之際，共和國總理站在廢墟上安慰悲痛欲絕的百姓要“好好活著”，把人之常情傳遞到了極致；災(zāi)禍臨頭，軍隊子弟兵臨陣受命，用挑戰(zhàn)極限的付出與承受，鼓舞著“活著就有希望”的決心，把人之常情升華到了信念；苦痛肆虐，不甘命運(yùn)擺布的堅強(qiáng)國人勇敢無畏，珍惜“還能活下來”的生命，以堅韌不拔的人之常情感動了世界。 　　At the time of crisis, the Prime Minister of the Republic stood on the ruins to comfort the grieving people to live well and pass on

2、 their common feelings to the extreme; at the moment of disaster, the armys children and soldiers were ordered to challenge the limits of their pay and bear, inspiring the determination of there is hope in life, and sublimating their common feelings to faith; the strong Chinese who suffered bitterly

3、 and were unwilling to be manipulated by fate were brave Fearless, cherish the life of still alive, and move the world with perseverance. 　　因為能夠“活了下來”，在強(qiáng)悍的自然面前，人們以超然的姿態(tài)表現(xiàn)出悲傷而不憤怒，痛苦而不壓抑，無奈而不絕望的冷靜，讓一個最普通的人之常情——“活著真好”，閃耀出人性的純真與堅強(qiáng)。從生存的特殊時期悟出“活著”的生命意義，得以重拾起生活的初衷，痛悔往日的紅塵喧囂給我們的污染，仿佛一個晝夜就讓我們站到了成人行列。 　　Bec

4、ause we can survive, in front of the fierce nature, people show sadness without anger, pain without depression, helplessness without despair, calm, let the most common human sentiment - its good to live, shine the innocence and firmness of human nature. From the special period of existence, we can r

5、ealize the meaning of living, pick up the original intention of life, and regret the pollution caused by the noise of the past, as if a day and night makes us stand in the ranks of adults. 　　曾經(jīng)計較過那么多的不情愿，讓自己生活在患得患失的怨恨中，因為出身卑微，花十二分的努力才達(dá)到他人三分工夫所達(dá)到的境地；因為長相平平，盡管心地善良卻總得不到異性的青睞……如果不是這場災(zāi)難的降臨，我可能會終生徘徊在這人生陰

6、影中，因為我不懂“活著真好”這份人之常情的真正含義。 　　I used to care about so much unwillingness and let myself live in the resentment of worrying about gain and loss. Because I was born in a humble family, it took 12 points of hard work to reach the position that others had achieved in three hours. Because I was plain in

7、appearance, although I was kind-hearted, I couldnt always get the favor of the opposite sex If it wasnt for this disaster, I would probably linger in the shadow of my life all my life, because I dont understand the real meaning of its good to live. 　　人之常情最能創(chuàng)造奇跡的原來是“活著真好”！ 　　Its true that its good

8、to live is the most miraculous thing in human nature! 　　“活著”的信仰已不是滿足肉體的衣食所需、物欲享受，而是戰(zhàn)勝悲哀，走出落寂的挑戰(zhàn)。 　　The belief of living is not to meet the needs of the body for food and clothing, but to overcome sorrow and get out of the challenge of silence. 　　生活路途不會一帆風(fēng)順，荊棘與風(fēng)雨摧殘著我們的軀體和意志，金錢和利益侵吞著我們的靈魂和情感，背負(fù)著太多的

9、期待，已經(jīng)舉步維艱，未老先衰了。“感謝”蒼天給了我一個認(rèn)識自己的機(jī)會，洗刷了內(nèi)心的污垢和情感的雜銹，明白了真善美的源頭出處。 　　The road of life will not be smooth, thorns and wind and rain destroy our body and will, money and interests encroach on our soul and emotion, bear too much expectation, have been struggling, not old. Thank you heaven gave me an oppor

10、tunity to know myself, to wash away the inner dirt and emotional rust, and to understand the source of truth, goodness and beauty. 　　“活著真好！”給了人生一次重新再來的豪情。“艱難困苦，玉汝于成”，功名利祿不過是南柯一夢，榮華富貴亦是鏡花水月，曾經(jīng)斤斤計較的東西竟然是那般虛幻而淺薄。抹去羞愧的淚水，睜大不再迷茫的雙眸，給自己加油：“活出一個新的自我！” 　　Its good to live! It gives life a chance to come ba

11、ck. Hard work and hardship make you a success. Fame and wealth are just a dream. Prosperity is also a mirror image. The things that used to be fussy are unreal and shallow. Wipe away the tears of shame, open the eyes that are no longer confused, and cheer yourself up: live a new self! 　　懂得了自尊，學(xué)會了堅強(qiáng)

12、，擁有了信念，活出能震撼世態(tài)常情的人生。 　　Know self-esteem, learn to be strong, have faith, live a life that can shake the world. 　　“好好”地活著，你相信我嗎？ 　　Do you believe me to live well? 　　【名師點評】 　　[comments on famous teachers] 　　本文在選材上很值得借鑒。汶川地震災(zāi)難之后寫情感，多數(shù)會引人重新陷入還未擺脫哀傷的圈中，反而會使選材過于集中，而忽視文中其他亮色。但此文作者非常機(jī)智，既以“5·12”地震為題材，又

13、選取其他題材，將二者緊密結(jié)合在一起，使文章既具時代特色又不至于過分集中到某個題材上，造成考場上選材的撞車。 　　This paper is worth learning in material selection. After the Wenchuan earthquake, writing emotions, most of them will lead people to fall back into the circle of sadness, but will make the selection too concentrated, and ignore other bright c

14、olors in the article. However, the author of this article is very witty, not only taking the May 12 earthquake as the theme, but also selecting other themes, combining them closely, which makes the article not only have the characteristics of the times, but also not too much focus on a theme, result

15、ing in the collision of materials in the examination room. 　　文章以排比段開頭，以“5·12”地震為題材，將人之常情與“活著真好”連接起來，引出話題，又扣住了題目，給文章寫作定了位，將抽象的題目具體化。主體部分，采用層層深入的方式揭示“活著真好”的內(nèi)涵：先寫非常時期悟出“活著”的生命意義，再寫平常時期自己不能懂得“活著真好”這份人之常情的真正涵義，形成對比，揭示“活著真好”的涵義；在此基礎(chǔ)上，作者進(jìn)一步指出“活著”的信仰已不是滿足肉體的衣食所需、物欲享受，而是戰(zhàn)勝悲哀，走出落寂的挑戰(zhàn)，上升到哲理、人生探求，使文章主題深刻、高遠(yuǎn)。結(jié)尾

16、問中有答的余味又為文章增添了一筆精彩，把成熟之后的思考表現(xiàn)為將付諸行動的誓言，尤其是“好好地”寓意深刻。 　　The article begins with a line-up section and takes the May 12 earthquake as the theme. It connects human feelings with its nice to be alive. It leads to the topic, and then holds the topic, sets the position for the writing of the article, and

17、 concretizes the abstract topic. In the main part, the author reveals the meaning of its good to live in an in-depth way: first, write the meaning of its good to live in an extraordinary period, and then write the real meaning of its good to live that you cant understand in an ordinary period, form

18、a contrast, and reveal the meaning of its good to live. On this basis, the author further points out that the belief of living is not satisfied The physical needs for food and clothing, material desire to enjoy, but to overcome sorrow, out of the challenge of silence, rise to philosophy, life explor

19、ation, so that the theme of the article is profound, high. The aftertaste of the answer in the closing question adds a wonderful touch to the article, which shows the mature thinking as the oath to put it into action, especially the profound meaning of well.