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高考英語作文 常見錯(cuò)誤剖析及寫作,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,1、漢語式思維 See the film will took me much time. He happened an accident yesterday.,2、謂語缺失 He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom. She in the classroom yesterday.,3、There be 句型出錯(cuò) There are five students play basketball on the playground. There are some workers are working in the field.,( An accident happened to him yesterday. ),,6、非謂語動(dòng)詞出錯(cuò) Being seriously ill, his class-mates sent him to hospital. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball.,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,4、謂語動(dòng)詞用法出錯(cuò) He dressed in a new coat. Great changes have been taken place. When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. He didn’t notice the teacher to come into the classroom.,5、詞性混用 She enjoys study English. If anyone against the plan, please let me know.,,,學(xué)生英語作文中10種常見錯(cuò)誤剖析,7、分?jǐn)?shù)與百分?jǐn)?shù)作主語 In our class, 20% sthdents are girls,but three fifths students are boys.,8、定語從句錯(cuò)誤 The two boys are reading are my brothers. The book I bought it is lost. I’ll never forget the days when we spent in the village together.,9、連詞出錯(cuò) Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others. My suggestion is we try for a second time.,10、形容詞、副詞混用 The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor. The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.,,,Dear Sue, I’m Li Hua, is one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all very miss you and are very grateful for you did for us. We are busy as usually. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize. This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted them together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and water them. The tree you planted yourself is growing good, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back see Sue Wood? How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you with your Ameican students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best, Li Hua,作文修改,,,,實(shí)例寫作,(2010 全國Ⅱ) 假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你?，F(xiàn)需招聘外教，請(qǐng)給他寫封信，告訴招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括： 1．教授課程：英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等 2．授課對(duì)象：高中生（至少三年英語基礎(chǔ)） 3．工作量： —每周12學(xué)時(shí)，任選三門課 —擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語俱樂部或英語校報(bào)顧問（advisor） 注意： 1．詞數(shù)100左右； 2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫； 3．開頭語已為你寫好，請(qǐng)將完整的回信寫出來。 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ________________________________________________________ Best, Li hua,寫作技巧點(diǎn)撥,1、提綱式作文為半開放型寫作。,2、要點(diǎn)均為4—5個(gè)（多為4+1個(gè)要點(diǎn)），要點(diǎn)提示比較簡潔，考生 111有發(fā)散思維的空間；,3、英語作文多為三段式： 1para.——Topic sentence ( main idea, writer’s attitude) 2nd para.——Body (different points) 3rd para.——Ending(writer’s own idea),4、盡量避免第一印象詞匯出現(xiàn),5、好的連詞與表達(dá)法的使用。,提煉文章要點(diǎn) 理解每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的含義，然后討論每個(gè)要點(diǎn)的正確表達(dá)方式。 形成文章。,范文,Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. ①Our school is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students. ②If you’d like to come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and America Today, and teach 12 periods a week. ③The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experiences. ④Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor for our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. ⑤Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other decisions. Best, Li hua,