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1、 Learning Target (學(xué)習(xí)目標(biāo)) We are learning how to write a paragraph to show ideas.paragraph ?段落 Yao Ming, the center of the Chinese National Mens Basketball Team, served the Huston Rockets in the 2002 NBA. The 2.26 m, 120 kg center becomes the first one to come from a foreign team. Yao Ming was born in

2、 Shanghai in September, 1980. His mother was a center and captain of the Chinese National Womens Team. His father played basketball, too. Sport analyst Bill Walton said, “Yao Ming has the potential the capability of changing the future of basketball.” Success Criteria (目標(biāo)達(dá)成要求)1.I can write a strong

3、topic sentence.2.I can write three detail sentences. 3.I can write a closing sentence.4.I can use words or phrases to make the ideas more clear.5.I can check my grammar, spelling and punctuation(, . ! ) after writing.G/N G-Good N-needs improvement detail sentence1detail sentence2detail sentence3clos

4、ing sentencetopic sentencebodybeginningending Task1: Underline the topic sentence. Task2:*Add transitional words or phrases for detail sentences.(添加過渡語) *Write a closing sentence. A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos._ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of anima

5、ls from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants. _zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. _zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. _. Word WallTransitional Word

6、s(過渡語）表示層次detail1detail2detail3表示總結(jié) closing first, firstly, first of all, to begin (start )with, second，secondly, then, next, after that, besides, whats morethird, thirdly, finally, lastly, at last，in the endin a word, in short , as a result Task 3:Reread the paragraph for mistakes and correct them.

7、 A lot of people think it is good to keep animals in zoos._ zoos are place for people to see many different kind of animals from all over the word. Without zoos, most of the people would never see tigers, lions ,elephants. _zoos look after the animals very well. The animals are always given food and cleaned regularly. _zoos protect the animals well. They offer them safe places to live in. _. Writing請寫一個段落列舉至少三種保持健康的方式。要求使用過渡語以及topic, detail ,closing sentences _請寫一個段落列舉至少三種保持健康的方式。要求使用過渡語以及topic, detail ,closing sentences _請寫一個段落列舉至少三種保持健康的方式。要求使用過渡語以及topic, detail ,closing sentences