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1、 One day, _.1 _. _. _.2 In my opinion, we should_.Step1. 作文模板作文模板1. 交代故事發(fā)生的時間、地點等交代故事發(fā)生的時間、地點等.2.2.介紹故事發(fā)展常用的句式介紹故事發(fā)展常用的句式.3.3.發(fā)表議論或看法發(fā)表議論或看法 .Step2. 真題例析真題例析假設(shè)你是圖假設(shè)你是圖1中的男孩，請根據(jù)以下中的男孩，請根據(jù)以下圖畫提供的情節(jié)線索，以圖畫提供的情節(jié)線索，以 “Sharing Housework”為題，用英文敘述你幫為題，用英文敘述你幫媽媽做家務(wù)的媽媽做家務(wù)的經(jīng)過經(jīng)過及及感想感想。 注意：注意：1.1.書面表達(dá)必須包括圖畫所表現(xiàn)的主要

2、書面表達(dá)必須包括圖畫所表現(xiàn)的主要內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使其連貫、完整。2.2.詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：100100左右。左右。 審題立意審題立意審題第審題第一一步：確定步：確定文體文體。這是一篇夾敘夾議的。這是一篇夾敘夾議的作文。作文。審題第審題第二二步：確定步：確定寫作目的寫作目的。讓大家懂得父母。讓大家懂得父母為我們?yōu)槲覀?付出之不易。付出之不易。審題第審題第三三步：確定步：確定寫作內(nèi)容寫作內(nèi)容。我要出去踢球，。我要出去踢球，看見媽媽要洗衣服；覺得媽媽太累了，決定看見媽媽要洗衣服；覺得媽媽太累了，決定要幫媽媽洗衣服；小朋友叫我去踢球，我沒要幫媽媽洗衣服；小朋友

3、叫我去踢球，我沒去；我覺得洗衣服很累人；我把衣服洗完了，去；我覺得洗衣服很累人；我把衣服洗完了，媽媽也回來了；我很高興；媽媽也回來了；我很高興；我的感想我的感想：我們：我們的父母的父母工作很辛苦，我們應(yīng)該經(jīng)常幫他們。工作很辛苦，我們應(yīng)該經(jīng)常幫他們。撰寫提綱撰寫提綱第一步：確定文章布局。這是一篇夾敘夾議的作文，先按一般記敘類作文的方式交代故事的起因、經(jīng)過、結(jié)果再寫自己的感想或看法。第二步：列要點：go out with my football（要去踢球）；do some washing, decide to help mum（媽媽要洗衣服，我決定幫忙）； invite me to play fo

4、otball, refuse（朋友來請我踢球，我拒絕了）； hard work for me, mum gets back and praises me, feel proud（媽媽回來表揚(yáng)了我，我很高興）；do something in return（談我的感 想）。低檔作文（第四檔，低檔作文（第四檔，8分）分）Sharing HouseworkIn the pictures, you can see that a boy is going out with a football. He is going to play with his friends, but his mother is

5、 busy washing clothes. When he finds that his mother is busy, he decides to help his mother. So he begins to wash clothes when his mother is away. After some time, one of his friends comes to ask him to play football. But he refuses, he finds it very hard to wash clothes. Finally, he finishes washin

6、g all the clothes and hangs them on a line. When his mother comes back, he is praised by his mother. He feels very happy.From this story, we learn that our parents do everything for us; they are very busy. Sometimes, we can do something to help them a little.高分作文高分作文 （第一檔，（第一檔，15分）分）Last Saturday mo

7、rning, I saw my mother was getting ready to wash some clothes when 1 I was about to go out with my football. I thought, “ How hard mum is working! She must be very tired.” So I decided to give up my plan and to help mum with the washing. I began to wash the clothes when my mum was away doing some sh

8、opping. 2 While I was washing, my friend Tim came to invite me to play football. I refused and continued washing. It was hard work for me, for I had seldom done such housework. After about two hours, I finished all the washing and hung all the clothes on a line. Later, 3 mum came back from shopping.

9、 When she saw what I had done, she was so pleased that she praised me. I felt proud of myself, too.I think our parents are working hard for us, and we should do what we can to help in return.4 Step3. 滿分克隆滿分克隆 Michael是一名美國中學(xué)生，在學(xué)校里選修漢語。他利用暑假到是一名美國中學(xué)生，在學(xué)校里選修漢語。他利用暑假到中國進(jìn)修，希望進(jìn)一步了解中國文化。有一天，他看到下面有關(guān)中國進(jìn)修，希望進(jìn)

10、一步了解中國文化。有一天，他看到下面有關(guān)成語的漫畫，不大明白其中的意思。請你用英語成語的漫畫，不大明白其中的意思。請你用英語把漫畫所表達(dá)的把漫畫所表達(dá)的故事和寓意故事和寓意寫成一段短文，向他解釋。寫成一段短文，向他解釋。 注意：注意：1要求用五句話表達(dá)；要求用五句話表達(dá)；2參考詞匯：參考詞匯：bump into (撞上撞上)，hoe (鋤頭鋤頭)1 There was once a farmer who worked very hard every day. One day when he was hoeing in the sunshine, he suddenly heard a low

11、sound “Peng”. He found a rabbit dead by the tree, so he took hold of the rabbit excitedly and had an idea that it was so easy to get a rabbit without any hard work. So he dropped off his hoe and waited there for more rabbits bumping into the tree. But day after day, there were no more rabbits coming

12、, and what was worse, all his crops were dead. This story tells us that we should not wait for unexpected gains by chance and luck. Or, we should not hope to get rewards without hard work. 2 Once upon a time there was a farmer who worked hard in the fields everyday. One day, while he was ploughing t

13、he fields, he heard a bumping sound. He saw a rabbit dead by the trump, so he picked it up happily and thought that it was so easy to get a rabbit without any hard work. From then on, he threw his hoe away and lay by the tree everyday, dreaming for more rabbits to come. When he finally realized his

14、foolishness and returned to his fields, he found that he got nothing but except his dead crops in the field. The story tells us that if you want to get something, you must work hard for it. Remember, “No pains, no gains!”克隆須知克隆須知 夾敘夾議類作文所記的故事一般都包含有一定的教育意夾敘夾議類作文所記的故事一般都包含有一定的教育意義，所以在寫作時一般義，所以在寫作時一般先先

15、寫某個故事或現(xiàn)象，寫某個故事或現(xiàn)象，然后然后根據(jù)這根據(jù)這個故事或現(xiàn)象所說明的問題發(fā)表看法、感想或評論。談自個故事或現(xiàn)象所說明的問題發(fā)表看法、感想或評論。談自己的感想、看法時，己的感想、看法時，可以可以用一兩句話，用一兩句話，也可以也可以用一小段話，用一小段話，可長可短。如果可長可短。如果有一定故事情節(jié)有一定故事情節(jié)，常以記事為主；如果只，常以記事為主；如果只是是說明某一現(xiàn)象說明某一現(xiàn)象，也可以以議論為主。，也可以以議論為主。 Step4. 拓展練習(xí)拓展練習(xí)Practice 1:請仔細(xì)觀察以下六幅圖請仔細(xì)觀察以下六幅圖,用英語用英語描述描述其內(nèi)其內(nèi)容容,并并就就圖中教師的圖中教師的做法提出做法提

16、出你的你的看法看法注意:1.第一幅圖的內(nèi)容已給出. 2. 要求用五句話表達(dá)； 簽名signature Ma Xiaohu was very careless and often made mistakes in his homework, which made his teacher very angry. One day his teacher had Xiaohu ask his father, Ma Dahua, to sign his name in his exercise book. Ma Xiaohu was very careless and often made mistak

17、es in his homework, which made his teacher very angry. One day his teacher had Xiaohu ask his father, Ma Dahua, to sign his name in his exercise book. On his way home, thinking that his father would punish him again, Xiaohu felt nervous, suddenly, a good idea occurred to him. When he got home, he ke

18、pt writing his name with his eyes covered with a piece of cloth, then, he asked his father to do so. When his father had his eyes covered, Xiaohu took his exercise book out quickly and put it in front of his father, by doing so, he got his fathers signature easily without telling his father what had

19、 happened. Before his father could see again, he had already put his exercise book back into his schoolbag. As far as I am concerned, the measures the teacher had taken didnt work at all, he should have educated Ma Xiaohu in another way which helps Xiaohu to overcome his shortcomings.Practice 2:Prac

20、tice 2:請請根據(jù)根據(jù)圖畫和所給詞語的圖畫和所給詞語的提示提示，敘述敘述某某天小明與其媽媽發(fā)生的天小明與其媽媽發(fā)生的故事故事。然后，。然后，再根據(jù)此故事內(nèi)容，再根據(jù)此故事內(nèi)容，發(fā)表發(fā)表你自己的你自己的感感想想（自擬）。（自擬）。 參考詞匯：參考詞匯：help, stop, knockdown, the fallen oil bottle, straighten, disagree, set a good example to, build up our society注意：不要受所給詞語的限制注意：不要受所給詞語的限制要求：要求：1要求用五句話表達(dá)；要求用五句話表達(dá)；2開頭已給出開頭已給出

21、 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over_ One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just

22、let the fallen oil bottle be, so she asked him if he had seen the fallen oil and why he hadnt straightened it up but Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did it.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set

23、 a good example to their children, they should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds, meanwhile, they should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. Remember， we live in the society which is a big family for all of us. 春節(jié)期間，我國南方多個地區(qū)遭受了幾十春節(jié)期間，我國

24、南方多個地區(qū)遭受了幾十年來罕見的雪災(zāi)。給人們的生產(chǎn)和生活帶年來罕見的雪災(zāi)。給人們的生產(chǎn)和生活帶來了極大的影響來了極大的影響-房屋倒塌，斷水?dāng)嚯姡课莸顾?，斷水?dāng)嚯姡称饭?yīng)緊張食品供應(yīng)緊張-。面對災(zāi)害，全國上下。面對災(zāi)害，全國上下齊心協(xié)力抗擊雪災(zāi)，展示了強(qiáng)大的中國精齊心協(xié)力抗擊雪災(zāi)，展示了強(qiáng)大的中國精神，請結(jié)合下圖為神，請結(jié)合下圖為China Daily 寫一篇簡寫一篇簡短的報道。短的報道。Practice 3:Practice 3: Disaster Occurred, Help Came During the Spring Festival, many areas across south

25、ern China saw a snow disaster never seen in more than 50 years. The snowstorm caused great damage to houses and power lines: millions of people suffered from the shortage of water, vegetables and power supply; roads were blacked, leaving tens of thousands of passengers unable to go back home. Facing

26、 the disaster, the government took all kinds of urgent measures to ensure everything returned to normal as soon as possible, soldiers cleared snow and ice on the road and rescued the people trapped in the snowstorm in the mean while repairmen worked around the clock to ensure water and power supply,

27、 for which some even lost their lives. Large quantities of aid relief, including the money donated by ordinary people across the whole country, were rushed to the disaster areas. Thanks to the joint efforts, people in the disaster areas were able to recover to normal. Looking back upon the experience, I feel that united, we are strong and the efforts of the Chinese government and the Chinese in face of hardships will be always appreciated.