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1、2010年開(kāi)放作文年開(kāi)放作文閱卷體會(huì)閱卷體會(huì) In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.首先，首先， 在教學(xué)中應(yīng)該規(guī)范學(xué)生的書(shū)寫(xiě)。在教學(xué)中應(yīng)該規(guī)范學(xué)生的書(shū)寫(xiě)。 連體字注意連體字注意i，f，t，c，r，v 如如credit credot 1分分其次，其次， 不交白卷不等于胡編亂造。不交白卷不等于胡編亂造?！拔恼乱獓@中心論點(diǎn)展開(kāi)（與討論內(nèi)容文章要

2、圍繞中心論點(diǎn)展開(kāi)（與討論內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系合情合理）之間的關(guān)系合情合理）” 如：如：I can see from the picter. A big tree, two house, and the Sun. 1分分In the picture, we can see two build in it. There it a high tree grow up between in the two buid. The sky have a big sun.In my opinion, at the hard government also have grow up. We must hard wor

3、k and study, we can grow up like tree. We should learn the high tree, dont afraid the bad government. 2分分 In the picture I can see two building, lift one is higher than Right one. in the middle have a tree. the tree is highest, the sun on the Right. It make me remember my childhood. I am bed kids. I

4、 like play games, so I always want go to outside, when I go to school. I feel so boring. So I didnt go to school when I want to play games, but I have a perfect and out stand teacher. She always wait me on our school door state, she tell me she so worried me. So I loved her, she give a warm heart, w

5、hen I get wrong, she will tell me the trues. When have a terrible. Shen will help me for all. I think I liked the pictures trees. You will have terrible or little sickness, yet you could go on, growing a particular trees, the sun like our teachers or our parents. Believe in you-self. 2分分第三，寫(xiě)作套路謹(jǐn)慎使用。

6、第三，寫(xiě)作套路謹(jǐn)慎使用。 2010年高考閱卷評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.圍繞中心論點(diǎn)中心論點(diǎn)展開(kāi)（與討論內(nèi)容的關(guān) 系）2.邏輯是否清晰，看整體通篇邏輯整體通篇邏輯3.內(nèi)容是否充實(shí)，說(shuō)出圖畫(huà)中的主要元素主要元素，但不必包括所有圖中的內(nèi)容，依據(jù)立意而定。4.看上下文的邏輯關(guān)系，以?xún)?nèi)容邏輯內(nèi)容邏輯為首要依據(jù)。如何得分：如何得分：1.1.訓(xùn)練讀圖能力訓(xùn)練讀圖能力主要論點(diǎn)：主要論點(diǎn)：1.在逆境中成長(zhǎng)在逆境中成長(zhǎng)2.父母應(yīng)給孩子更多父母應(yīng)給孩子更多的的 發(fā)展空間發(fā)展空間3.城市發(fā)展與環(huán)境保城市發(fā)展與環(huán)境保護(hù)護(hù)4.改變不了環(huán)境，改改變不了環(huán)境，改變自己變自己如何得分：如何得分：2.2.訓(xùn)練語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力訓(xùn)練語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力 第

7、四檔：看不出描圖與解圖的關(guān)系第四檔：看不出描圖與解圖的關(guān)系 0分：亂抄，寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容與圖片無(wú)關(guān)分：亂抄，寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容與圖片無(wú)關(guān) 4分：描述與闡述間有聯(lián)系分：描述與闡述間有聯(lián)系 5分：描述與闡述間有更多聯(lián)系。分：描述與闡述間有更多聯(lián)系。Look at the picture, we can see the sun, a tree and two buildings. And the buildings is different of we can see in oue live. The tree is between thr teo trees. It can not grow up stick. B

8、ut it grow up yet and it can meet the sun.I think the picture want to tell me that we cant afrid the difficulty, if we can do it and we can solve it, we should believe in my myself. 4分分From the picture we can see there is a tree growing among the two buildings. But the tree is very tall.It is trying

9、 ti tellus that when we face the difficuty we should be brave. We must try to find solution about the difficuty.In my opinion, only in this way, can we reach our goal and have a more beautiful life. 5分分 As is shown in the picture, there are two buildings, and there is a tree between them. The tree i

10、s tall but bent. And there is a big sun in the sky.I think the picture tries to tell us that when we so something, we should find a right way. We should know what is suit us. If not, we will live difficultly, just like the tree in the picture, if choose the wrong place to live, so it is bent, and it

11、 is difficult ti live long. So o thing before we do something, we should think whether this way is suit us carefully, if we decited, cant regret. If we do something carefully, our life will be more beautiful. 7分分9分分From this picture, we can see that a tree is growing between two high buildings. What

12、 surprised me was that the tree is tall but not straight. It seems as if it cant grow up tall. What the picture wants to convey is that we should pay more attention to our enviroment. Nowadays, we can see more and more tall buildings around us, but it is difficult for us to see the green grass and t

13、all trees. Its likely that buildings will eventually take the place of the trees. For the sake of our health, wed better leave some space for the trees, which is good for our lives. Only in this way, can we have a nice life. 12分分 As the pictures shows, a tree is growing tall under the sunlight betwe

14、en two buildings. Though the buildings shape manage to prevent the tree from growing tall, but the tree just follows the narrow space between the buildings, growing tall and strong. The tree in the picture taught us a philosophy in our daily life. When we come across some difficulties which seems to

15、 prevent us from being success (like the buildings in the picture), we cant just stop our steps. Instead of giving up, we should learn to be flexiblethat is, we should learn to overcome the difficulties and find the possible way that can lead us to success, just like the tree in the picture. Once we

16、 can be flexible enough, nothing can prevent us from reaching our goals. 13分分As is shown in the picture, there is a tree with a winding trunk standing in the surrounding of two buildings. As the two buildings block the way of free growing for the tree, it can only twist its body and try its best to

17、meet the sun. Then, it succeeded! The unfortunate tree gets rid of the block of the two building and is growing in the sun happily and healthily. The picture conveys the message that success comes from trying ones best. The growth of the tree is full of setbacks as there are two buildings blocking i

18、ts way of growing. When it comes to our life, there are also a lot of stones lying in the path of our success. The only thing we can do it to try our best to remove the stones. Without effort, nothing can be achieved. Without effort, no success can we gain. Remember that success comes from sweet. We

19、 should learn from the tough tree: meet the challenges and try our best! In the picture, a tree is placed between two strangely-shaped buildings. Despite the fact that the two buildings are blocking the trees growth, the tree is still growing around the edges of the buildings in order to reach the o

20、pen sky and sunlight. I think that a lot can be learned from the strong-willed tree in the picture. Not only does the tree not give up in the face of difficulty, it also manages to handle the annoying situation skillfully. We are all bound to meet wit problems and challenges in our daily lives. Some

21、 give up while some choose to adopt a positive attitude and come up with the best solution. Those are the ones sure to succeed. If any difficulty tries to get in our way, we ought to shout: “ Hell we wont give up!” and do our best to solve it. Only in this way can we taste the sweet air and sunshine, just like the tree in the picture. 14分分Thanks！