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1、第三部分第三部分-1-名師高效課堂專題一提綱作文專題一提綱作文第三部分寫作指導(dǎo)第三部分第三部分-2-名師高效課堂專題一提綱作文專題一提綱作文專題突破第三部分第三部分-3-名師高效課堂專題一提綱作文專題一提綱作文專題一提綱作文名師高效課堂名師高效課堂一、書信、電子郵件典例1(2015新課標(biāo)全國卷)假定你是李華,你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請給美國朋友Peter寫信約稿,要點如下:1.欄目介紹;2.稿件內(nèi)容;3.稿件長度:約400詞;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文章開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。 名

2、師高效課堂Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. Yours,Li Hua 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles

3、 written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.Yo

4、u can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua 名師高效課堂典例2(2015天津高考)假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會主席李津,你校擬向美國友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈一批圖書。請根據(jù)以下提示,寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯(lián)系,并告知將于今年七月赴對方學(xué)校參加夏令營時帶去贈書

5、。1.自我介紹;2.擬捐贈圖書的類型、冊數(shù)、用途等;3.詢問對方的其他需求。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;2.請適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫。參考詞匯:學(xué)生會 the Students Union名師高效課堂Dear Chris, Yours,Li Jin 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear Chris,Im Li Jin,chairman of the Students Union in Chenguang High School.Im writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance c

6、ommunication with your school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.Well take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school.Would you please tell me something about your

7、 other requirements?We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin 名師高效課堂英文書信、電子郵件一般由以下五部分組成:1.信頭:即寫信人的地址和寫信的日期。書信中要寫在信紙的右上角。2.稱呼:指對收信人的稱呼。寫在左上角,頂格寫;稱呼后面的標(biāo)點一般用逗號“,”。3.正文:即信件的主體部分。寫在稱呼的下一行,一般由左邊

8、第五個字母處開始寫起。注意:在寫回信時,正文的開頭除簡單的問候外,應(yīng)該總結(jié)一下上封來信中提出的問題、需求等,使收信人更清楚地了解這封回信的意圖。4.結(jié)束語:指正文結(jié)尾的客套語。位置應(yīng)低于正文一兩行。一般從信紙的中間稍右寫起,第一個字母大寫,末尾用逗號。常用的結(jié)束語有Yours,Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours,Yours truly,With best regards,Best wishes等。5.署名:即寫信人的稱呼。寫在結(jié)束語的下面。 名師高效課堂1.I am grateful to you for.我非常感謝你 2.Its kind of you to do

9、 this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.你為我做這件事真的是太好了,我不知道怎么表達(dá)我的感謝之情。3.I must apologize to you for.對于我表示非常抱歉。4.I am pleased to invite you to attend.很高興邀請你參加 5.I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.我敢肯定你在這里會玩得很開心。 6.We look forward to seeing you.我們期盼見到你。7.I was delighted to rece

10、ive your letter.很高興收到你的來信。8.Your letter came to me this morning.我今天早上收到你的來信。 9.Im writing to ask if you can come next week.我寫信問你下周是否能過來。10.Thank you for your letter.感謝你的來信。 名師高效課堂11.Please remember me to your whole family.請代我向你的家人問好。12.Give my best regards/wishes to your mother.請代我向你母親致以美好的祝福。13.Wis

11、h you success.祝你成功。14.Wish you the best of health/luck.祝你健康/好運。15.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.期盼盡快收到你的來信。 名師高效課堂(一)(2016福建三明第一中學(xué)月考)假如你是李華,你所在的學(xué)校攝影協(xié)會將于周六上午在北山公園舉行主題為 “The Beauty of Nature”的活動,集合時間是上午9:00,集合地點是公園入口。受邀的外教Bob將從學(xué)校出發(fā),由于擔(dān)心他不熟悉地形,你給他寄去一張路線圖并寫一封信進(jìn)行說明,以便他能順利到達(dá)。內(nèi)容包括:1.說明活動集合

12、的時間和地點;2.介紹從校門口到公園的路線;承諾在公園門口等他；3.簡單談?wù)勥@次活動的意義和你的期待。名師高效課堂要求:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.根據(jù)內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文章開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:攝影協(xié)會photography club;路線route;校園路Campus Road 名師高效課堂Dear Bob, I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic “The Beauty of Nature” in Be

13、ishan Park this Saturday. Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear Bob,I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic “The Beauty of Nature” in Beishan Park this Saturday.We will meet at the entrance of the park at 9 00 am.Since you are not fam

14、iliar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.After going out of our school,go along Campus Road until you come to the first traffic lights.Then turn right.Go straight along Beishan Road and after ten minutes youll see the park at the end of the road,and we will be waiting for you at th

15、e gate.I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.I am sure we will have a good time.Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua 名師高效課堂(二)(2016天津“五?！甭?lián)考)假設(shè)你是李華,你上周剛剛參加了你校舉辦的第十屆英語演講比賽,并從三十名選手中脫穎而出,榮獲“十佳獎”。在準(zhǔn)備參賽期間,你的外教Mr Craige為你提供了很多指導(dǎo)和幫助?，F(xiàn)請你

16、用英語給他寫一封電子郵件,內(nèi)容包括:1.獲獎情況及感受;2.回顧準(zhǔn)備過程;3.感謝他的幫助;4.邀請他來你家做客。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文章開頭已經(jīng)寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:十佳獎Top Ten Prize;選手competitor 名師高效課堂Dear Mr Craige,I am writing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school. Yours,Li Hua 名師高效課堂【參考范文

17、】Dear Mr Craige,I am writing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school.I got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors,which was totally beyond my imagination.When I heard the final result I couldnt believe my ears and jumped with joy.Thanks

18、 to your effort,I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.Before the contest,whenever you had free time,you would help me practice my spoken English.You communicated with me as much as possible,and corrected my pronunciation and intonation as well.Whats more,you taught me some helpfu

19、l speaking skills and made me full of confidence.Without your help I couldnt have achieved such a good result.I have benefited from this competition a lot.All in all,I really appreciate your help.名師高效課堂Thank you again for your advice and kind help.I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and hav

20、e a good time.Yours,Li Hua 名師高效課堂二、通知典例(2014遼寧高考)假定你是學(xué)生會主席李華。學(xué)校將舉辦一次以“校園生活創(chuàng)意無限”(Innovations on Campus)為主題的創(chuàng)意作品展評活動。請你根據(jù)以下圖示,以短文形式用英語寫一份書面通知。 名師高效課堂注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮,以使行文連貫;3.開頭及結(jié)尾已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:校園 campus;創(chuàng)意作品 innovation;頒獎 prize-givingNoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around

21、the corner. The Students Union 名師高效課堂【參考范文】NoticeAn exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills.Note that your innovations must be school things.Along with your

22、wonderful innovation,you need to hand in a report,explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use.All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony?Sure!Itll be held from 15 00 to 17 00 on June 18.So dont miss the chance o

23、f being the winner.Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.For any questions,call Li Hua at 44876655.Come on,everybody!Its your show time.The Students Union 名師高效課堂通知是一種常用應(yīng)用文體,宣布即將發(fā)生的事情及其具體內(nèi)容,因而多用將來時態(tài),其中包含的一些注意事項,一般用祈使句來強調(diào)。通知還必須具備三個要素:時間、地點和活動內(nèi)容,而且這些要素必須準(zhǔn)確無誤。通知一般分為書面通知和口頭通知兩種,這

24、兩種通知在格式上有較大差別。1.書面通知的常見形式有布告、海報等。它們一般張貼在布告欄或黑板上。通知的正文上方有Notice(或NOTICE)或Announcement(或ANNOUNCEMENT)為標(biāo)題。書面通知的正文一般用第三人稱來寫。時間、地點、參加者、內(nèi)容、注意事項是通知的要點,應(yīng)在正文中直截了當(dāng)?shù)匾灰挥枰哉f明。書面通知一定要有發(fā)通知的時間及落款。 名師高效課堂2.口頭通知一般不用寫題目,也不必有出通知的時間。由于口頭通知是面對面的告知事情,所以應(yīng)該有稱呼和開頭語,還要用結(jié)束語。稱呼語:“Boys and girls”,“Ladies and gentlemen”等;開頭語:“Atte

25、ntion,please!”,“May I have your attention,please?”,“Be quiet,please!”,其后加上“I have an announcement to make.”;結(jié)束語之前常用“Please attend it on time.”,“Do be present on time.”,“Everyone is/All are welcome/expected.”,“Dont be late.”等。結(jié)束時可加上“Thats all.”,“Thank you!”之類的客套話。 名師高效課堂1.Ladies and gentlemen,may I h

26、ave your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.女士們,先生們,請注意。下面播報一則通知。2.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.歡迎各位參加這次的競賽。3.The Students Union has decided to organize a music week.學(xué)生會決定組織“音樂周”活動。4.Please sign your name/fill in a.form.請您簽上自己的姓名/填寫表格。5.Please listen carefully and w

27、ell have a discussion in groups later.請認(rèn)真聽,之后我們會進(jìn)行小組討論。6.Come to have the great fun!快來玩吧!7.The place for the activities will be announced later.活動地點將稍后通知。 名師高效課堂8.Theres been a change in our time schedule this week.The meeting will be put off until next week.本周我們的計劃表有所變動,會議將推遲至下周。9.Dont forget to br

28、ing your gifts with you.不要忘了帶禮物。10.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.請盡早確認(rèn)您的參加信息。 名師高效課堂(2016寧夏大學(xué)附屬中學(xué)月考)假如你是校學(xué)生會主席,高二年級將于下個月舉辦英語周活動,請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容寫一篇英語書面通知。時間:12月7日11日 下午4:306:30。地點:學(xué)校體育館?；顒影才?1.周一開幕式,周五閉幕式;2.周二知識競賽,周三英語演講比賽,周四英文歌曲比賽。特別要求:每班準(zhǔn)備一個英語短劇,在開幕式或閉幕式上表演。請各班務(wù)必認(rèn)真組織,爭取把這次英

29、語周辦得豐富多彩。名師高效課堂注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.要點齊全,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。提示詞:體育館 gymnasiumNoticeThe English Week held every two years is approaching. The Students UnionNovember 28 名師高效課堂【參考范文】NoticeThe English Week held every two years is approaching.All the students in Grade Two are required to take par

30、t in it at 4 30 pm every day,and it will last 5 days,from December 7th to 11th.The activities include the Opening Ceremony on Monday and the Closing Ceremony on Friday.Besides,we have Knowledge Contest,English Speech Contest and English Songs Competition in the rest of the three days as well.As for

31、the details of the competition,please ask your English teacher.Be sure that each class should give an English drama performance and make every effort to present us an interesting and colorful English Week.The Students UnionNovember 28 名師高效課堂三、致辭典例(2016福建莆田第二十五中學(xué)月考)外教Smith先生將來你校工作,安排任教你班的口語課,請你以英語老師的

32、身份致歡迎辭。要點如下:1.Smith先生來自美國;2.他在美國也是一位老師,他的課生動有趣;3.他將在我校工作兩年;4.起初,我們可能不能完全聽懂他的課,但這種情況不會持續(xù)很久;5.希望他在我校工作期間生活愉快、工作順利。注意:1.不能逐條翻譯上述要點;2.詞數(shù)100左右。 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Boys and girls,Attention,please!Im glad to have the honor to introduce to you a guest,Mr Smith.He is a teacher from America.In the following two year

33、s,he will teach us oral English.His classes are lively and interesting.So Im sure that you will enjoy his classes.At first,we may have some trouble in understanding him.However,as time goes on,it will get better and better.I hope you will make best use of the chance to practise your spoken English.B

34、est wishes to Mr Smith.Thats all.Thank you. 名師高效課堂一般致辭包括以下要素:稱呼(Salutation),客套語(Conversational Routine),介紹情況(Body),結(jié)束語(Ending)。1.稱呼。致辭開始一般都要以Ladies and gentlemen,Boys and girls,Teachers and students,Dear friends或Welcome everybody等開始,以吸引聽眾注意。2.客套語。歡迎他人時可講:It is my special pleasure to welcome.等;開幕時可講:

35、Thank you for coming tonight to celebrate this happy and joyous occasion等;歡送時可講:May you have a wonderful time等。3.介紹情況。做好這類題目把握好提示十分重要。歡迎詞必須交代清楚歡迎誰,客人的主要身份,同時把客人介紹給大家。歡送詞則要說清歡送哪一位,該客人什么時候離開,客人在逗留期間進(jìn)行了哪些活動等。4.結(jié)束語。結(jié)束時一般以Thank you 致謝或表達(dá)其他祝福如:I wish you the best of luck in the New Year,I hope you will ha

36、ve a very enjoyable stay等。 名師高效課堂1.First of all,lets give our warm welcome to our honorable guest(s).首先,請向我們尊貴的客人致以熱烈的歡迎。2.Now lets welcome.to give us a lecture.現(xiàn)在請歡迎給我們做講座。3.Now let us invite.to address us.現(xiàn)在請歡迎為大家講話。4.I would also like to take this opportunity to wish him/her a pleasant safe journ

37、ey home.我也想借此機會祝他/她歸途一帆風(fēng)順。5.We wish Mr/Mrs/Miss.a pleasant journey and good health.我們祝先生/夫人/小姐一帆風(fēng)順,身體健康。6.We are looking forward to seeing him/her again.我們期待再次見到他/她。7.It is my special pleasure to welcome our new member,Mr Brown,who has come here from the United States.我十分榮幸在此歡迎我們的新成員,布朗先生。他剛從美國回來。 名

38、師高效課堂8.I am very happy to see all of you here to celebrate the arrival of the New Year.我很高興大家歡聚在此慶祝新年的到來。9.Now in bidding farewell to.,allow me on behalf of.to express our sincere thanks once again to him/her.在此向道別,請允許我代表再次向他/她致以誠摯的謝意。10.Today,we gather here to have a send-off meeting.今天,我們聚集在此召開送別會

39、。 名師高效課堂(一)美籍教師Mr Black明天將離開你校回國。他教你們多年口語與聽力,對學(xué)生既和藹又嚴(yán)格;他的課講得既生動又有趣,受到學(xué)生的歡迎。在他回國前夕,學(xué)生舉行歡送會,請你代表全體同學(xué)發(fā)言,對布萊克先生表示感謝并祝他旅途愉快。注意:1.要點要全,但不能逐句翻譯。2.詞數(shù)100左右。 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear friends,Now we gather here to have a send-off meeting.Our English teacher Mr Black is going to return to his home country tomorrow.On b

40、ehalf of all my schoolmates here I express our sincere thanks to him.In the past few years,Mr Black has taught us spoken English and extensive listening.As is known to us all,not only is Mr Black kind and patient to us,but he is also strict with us now and then.With his help,we all have made rapid p

41、rogress in English.We enjoyed his lessons very much because his method of teaching was quite different from other teachers.The lessons he gave us were both lively and interesting.Now he will leave our school soon.We thank him very much for his wonderful work and wish him a good journey. 名師高效課堂(二)Mr

42、Alexander應(yīng)邀來你校做講座,講解如何學(xué)習(xí)寫作及中國學(xué)生學(xué)英語的情況。現(xiàn)由你代表學(xué)生用英語致歡迎辭。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括:1.表示歡迎;2.介紹Mr Alexander:美國著名語言學(xué)家,著有New Concept English,Follow Me等書籍;3.同學(xué)們提問題。注意:1.要點齊全,但不能逐條翻譯;2.詞數(shù)100左右。參考詞匯:語言學(xué)家 linguist 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Boys and girls,We feel greatly honored to be here with Professor Alexander,a world famous linguist from A

43、merica.Now allow me on behalf of all the students of our school to extend our warm welcome and sincere greetings to our distinguished guest.Mr Alexander has written lots of books,including New Concept English and Follow Me,both of which are well known to us.Today Mr Alexander is here to give us a le

44、cture on writing and about English study in middle schools in China.If you have any question on English study,you are free to turn to him for help.Now let us invite Professor Smith to address us. 名師高效課堂四、發(fā)言稿典例(2013天津高考)假設(shè)你是某大學(xué)的學(xué)生李津。你校英語俱樂部將選舉新一屆副主席,負(fù)責(zé)規(guī)劃、組織俱樂部的相關(guān)活動。你欲參選。請按以下提示,寫一篇競選演講稿。 個人優(yōu)勢介紹(如性格、特長

45、等); 組織校內(nèi)活動的設(shè)想(如舉辦講座、英語晚會等); 組織校際交流活動的設(shè)想(如舉辦辯論賽、演講比賽等); 表達(dá)當(dāng)選的愿望。注意:1.詞數(shù)不少于100;2.請勿提及真實學(xué)校名稱;3.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫;4.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。 名師高效課堂參考詞匯:副主席 vice president;競選 run forGood afternoon,my dear friends.My name is Li Jin.Thank you. 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Good afternoon,my dear friends.My name is Li Jin.Today I

46、am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.Concerning this position,I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing,getting on well with others,and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.If I am lucky enough to be the vice president,I will try my best

47、 to assist the president and serve my fellow students.In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English,I intend to organize some activities such as lectures,English parties,English speech contests and so on.I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I w

48、ill be a good vice president.Thank you. 名師高效課堂1.發(fā)言稿是發(fā)言者為了發(fā)表自己的意見、看法或匯報思想、工作情況而事先準(zhǔn)備好的文稿。格式一般由稱呼、正文、結(jié)束語三部分構(gòu)成。(1)稱呼。常用的稱呼有Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss.,Dear Sir/Madam,Ladies and gentlemen等。也可以不用稱呼,直接寫正文。(2)正文。正文應(yīng)該開門見山提出問題及對問題的看法,然后說明理由,最后照應(yīng)開頭對全文作簡明扼要的總結(jié),總結(jié)一定要簡練有力,切中要點。在匯報經(jīng)驗、情況等的發(fā)言中,要注意對情況的敘述,介紹自己的體會或者收獲等系統(tǒng)總結(jié),內(nèi)容完整,

49、不遺漏要點。(3)結(jié)束語。發(fā)言結(jié)束時,一般常用“Thank you for listening.”,“Thats all.Thank you.”,“Thanks a lot.”等表示感謝。有時發(fā)言者還在結(jié)尾時直接提出希望,向聽眾發(fā)出號召。 名師高效課堂2.發(fā)言稿的注意事項。(1)注意發(fā)言稿的對象。發(fā)言稿是直接面向聽眾的,所以發(fā)言的時候觀點要鮮明,感情要真摯,能給人以可信性和可靠感,這樣才能打動人,引起聽眾的共鳴。(2)注意發(fā)言稿的語言。語言要直白簡潔,句子要精悍有力,文字要朗朗上口,語言要節(jié)奏感強。因而發(fā)言時注意多采用簡單句,語言要口語化,多用排比句,多使用重復(fù)修辭格,注意合理使用祈使句、設(shè)問

50、句等。 名師高效課堂1.Id like to tell you something about.我想告訴你一些關(guān)于的事。2.Let me give you a brief introduction about.允許我給你簡單地介紹3.Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangement to you.請允許我向你介紹一下旅行安排。4.Personally,I think it is a good idea for us to.就我個人而言,我認(rèn)為對我們來說是好主意。5.Firstly,we are expected to.Secondly,.L

51、astly,.首先,我們需要其次,最后,6.It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of.我很榮幸能代表做演講。7.The first thing we can do is to.As we all know.What we can do next is to.For example.Besides.首先我們能做的是眾所周知我們接下來能做的是例如另外 名師高效課堂(2016河北冀州中學(xué)月考)假如你是李華,你們學(xué)校最近開展了“創(chuàng)建平安校園”的活動。你們班為此組織主題班會,請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,談一談你對如何創(chuàng)建平安校園的一些想

52、法。短文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:1.安全意識的重要性;2.在運動中要注意安全;3.在校內(nèi)要注意人身安全;4.同學(xué)間發(fā)生矛盾時,一定要保持冷靜、理智;5.逐步將“平安校園”活動轉(zhuǎn)換為全體師生的實際行動。注意:1.不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫;2.開頭已給出,不計入總詞數(shù);3.詞數(shù)100左右。 名師高效課堂參考詞匯:校園安全 safety at schoolMy dear classmates,There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life.Recently our school 名師高效課堂【參

53、考范文】My dear classmates,There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life.Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay in.I consider this as indeed a good practice,which will make us aware that safety should always come first in

54、 our daily life,whether when we stay at school or outside.When we are doing sports,we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt.Furthermore,when we get into trouble with our classmates,we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting,which may only bring suffering and pain to u

55、s mentally and physically.As far as Im concerned,I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and try to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind.Besides,we are supposed to observe the law discipline wherever we are at any moment.Thanks. 名師高效課堂五、介紹事物、闡明事理典例1(2013新課標(biāo)全國卷)假定你是李華,自制一些中國結(jié)(Ch

56、inese knot)。給開網(wǎng)店的美國朋友Tom寫封信,請他代賣,要點包括:1.外觀(尺寸、顏色、材料);2.象征意義;3.價格。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭語已為你寫好,不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Tom,How are you doing? Li Hua 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear Tom,How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads,cloth and other ma

57、terials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know mor

58、e about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information.Thank you!Li Hua 名師高效課堂典例2假設(shè)你是李華,你的美國筆友Peter曾表示希望來中國教書。你?，F(xiàn)在需招聘外教,請給他寫封信,告知招聘信息。內(nèi)容主要包括:1.教授課程:英語口語、英語寫作、今日美國、今日英國等;2.授課對象:高中生(至少三年英語基礎(chǔ));3.工作量:每周12學(xué)時,任選三門課;擔(dān)任學(xué)生英語俱樂部或英語校報顧問(advisor)。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連

59、貫。 名師高效課堂【參考范文】Dear Peter,I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.If you come,you can choose three of the following four courses:Speaking,Writing,America Today and Britain Today,and t

60、each 12 hours a week.The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience.Besides teaching,you will also work as an advisor to our students English club or our schools English newspaper.Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any

61、other questions.Id be more than happy to help.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 名師高效課堂1.介紹事物類寫作應(yīng)注意以下幾點:(1)時態(tài)常用一般現(xiàn)在時,同時常用被動語態(tài);語言比較客觀,一般用第三人稱寫作。(2)說明事物必須注意表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確,條理清晰,層次分明,語言簡練和用詞準(zhǔn)確。特別注意適當(dāng)使用過渡詞將上下文的邏輯關(guān)系體現(xiàn)出來。(3)常用的說明方法有羅列法(listing)、舉例法(examples)、比較法(comparison and contrast)、定義法(definition)、順序法(sequence of time,spac

62、e and process)以及分類法(classification)等。在寫作過程中要根據(jù)情況使用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼f明方法。2.事理說明文的說明方法及順序不同于事物說明文。寫事理說明文要確切把握需要介紹的事情,并注意層次性,條理性與準(zhǔn)確性。事理說明文?？刹捎谩叭问健苯Y(jié)構(gòu)。第一段,提出文章的主題,即文章想要闡述說明的主要內(nèi)容。第二段,是文章的核心部分,對文章的主題進(jìn)行展開說明。最后一段,即書信的結(jié)尾段,可表達(dá)愿望等。 名師高效課堂1.As for the price,it is surprisingly low.It costs only 70% of that of the same kind of

63、 other laptops.關(guān)于它的價格,現(xiàn)在非常低。它的花費只有其他同類電腦的70%。2.The bag is small in size and light in weight,so youll feel it very convenient and easy to use.包的尺寸很小,重量很輕,因此你會發(fā)覺它用起來既方便又簡單。3.The purse enjoys a good fame for its high quality.該錢包因質(zhì)量上乘享有盛譽。4.This kind of Digital Camera is a newcomer in the camera family.

64、這種數(shù)碼相機是數(shù)碼家族中的新產(chǎn)品。5.Its a small leather case with a broken handle on it,in which there are some personal belongings.這是一個帶有斷把的小型皮箱,里面裝有一些私人物品。6.You might as well try the following advice to do a thorough cleanup of your keyboard regularly.你也許可以嘗試一下以下建議來定期全面清理你的鍵盤。 名師高效課堂7.I hold the idea that autonomo

65、us learning should become the main stream in the future language learning.我堅持認(rèn)為自主學(xué)習(xí)應(yīng)當(dāng)成為未來語言學(xué)習(xí)中的主流。8.In a word/In short,English is an important language.It is necessary for us to learn and master English.簡而言之,英語是一門重要的語言,我們很有必要學(xué)習(xí)并掌握英語。9.Music,too,is another effective means of refreshing and helping us

66、 concentrate better.音樂也是一種有效的放松途徑,能幫我們更好地集中精神。10.Besides,it should be a good idea to make trips to Sichuan,because by doing so youll learn and remember the dialect more easily.另外,去四川旅游應(yīng)當(dāng)是一個好主意,因為通過這樣做你能更輕松地學(xué)習(xí)和記憶方言。 名師高效課堂(一)(2016山東新泰第一中學(xué)月考)假設(shè)你是李華,你的英國筆友Tom打算來北京游玩兩天。請寫一封郵件給他,向他介紹以下有關(guān)北京的情況,及建議在京期間兩天的日程安排,并歡迎他來北京玩。1.北京概況:地理位置:位于華北地區(qū),是全球擁有最多世界文化遺址的城市;面積:16000平方公里;人口:1300萬。2.日程安排:第一天:游覽長城、拍照并購買紀(jì)念品;第二天:登天安門城樓俯瞰紫禁城,參觀故宮博物院感受中國傳統(tǒng)文化。名師高效課堂注意:1.信件開頭和結(jié)尾已寫好,不計入總詞數(shù);2.詞數(shù)100左右;3.不能使用真實的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。參考詞匯:天安門城樓 Tiana