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1、 1 General structure1 General structure3 Advanced expressions3 Advanced expressionsVarious structuresVarious structuresGraceful wordsGraceful words2 Linking words2 Linking wordsElements of a passageTopic sentenceTopic sentence Supporting Supporting sentencessentences Concluding sentence Concluding s

2、entence一、文章總體模板一、文章總體模板1. 文章開頭的總體交待文章開頭的總體交待 起起 （ 引出主題）引出主題）A. Recently, we had a discussion about B. we carried out a survey of C. When it comes to the topic whether 2. 呈現(xiàn)不同觀點(diǎn)的句式呈現(xiàn)不同觀點(diǎn)的句式 轉(zhuǎn)承轉(zhuǎn)承 （陳述觀點(diǎn)）（陳述觀點(diǎn)） A. Some of them are in favor of the idea that However, others hold a completely opposite opin

3、ion. B. Some people firmly believe that. Others argue that 呈現(xiàn)論據(jù)時(shí)常用的連接詞呈現(xiàn)論據(jù)時(shí)常用的連接詞in the first place, _(原因一). Furthermore, in the second place, _(原因二). So it goes without saying that _(觀點(diǎn)一). Some people hold the idea that_ (觀點(diǎn)二). In their point of view, on the one hand，_(原因一) . On the other hand, _ (

4、原因二). Therefore, there is no doubt that _(觀點(diǎn)二). 3. 結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)和總結(jié)的用語結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)和總結(jié)的用語 結(jié)結(jié) （ 總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)）總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)）As far as Im concerned,/ From my point of view, / To sum up, 方法一方法一 : 使用多種句子結(jié)構(gòu)使用多種句子結(jié)構(gòu)1 If she is compared with other teachers , we find she pays more attention to her way of teaching.(狀語)Compared with

5、 other teachers , she pays more attention to his Compared with other teachers , she pays more attention to his way of teaching.way of teaching.2 You should keep silent at the meeting unless you are invited to speak. (連詞+分詞)Unless invited , you should keep silent at the meeting .Unless invited , you

6、should keep silent at the meeting .3He didnt realize his foolishness until he returned home.(倒裝/強(qiáng)調(diào))Not until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessNot until he returned home did he realize his foolishnessIt was not until he returned home that he realized his It was not until he returned hom

7、e that he realized his foolishness.foolishness.二、高分作文技巧二、高分作文技巧4 We can achieve a satisfying grade by changing the way we study. (only倒裝). 5 How should we protect eyesight? It still remains a question among us.(主語從句)6 We should emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight.(cant too much)Only

8、by changing the way we study can we achieve a Only by changing the way we study can we achieve a satisfying grade.satisfying grade.How to protect our eyesight still remains a question How to protect our eyesight still remains a question among us.among us.We cant emphasize the importance of protectin

9、g our We cant emphasize the importance of protecting our eyesight too much.eyesight too much.方法二方法二: 善用高級(jí)詞匯善用高級(jí)詞匯Which is better? 1 1 周末我們會(huì)有很多作業(yè)要做周末我們會(huì)有很多作業(yè)要做. .A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. A We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B We have a lot of homework to do at the

10、weekend . B We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 2 在我所有的老師里在我所有的老師里, ,毛老師給我留下了很毛老師給我留下了很深的印象深的印象. .A Of all my teachers, I still remember MrA Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr Moore. Moore.B Of all my teachers, MrB Of all my teachers, Mr Moore gave me the Moore gave me the deepes

11、t impression.deepest impression.3 3 高級(jí)培訓(xùn)班結(jié)束后回到家，他的妻子高級(jí)培訓(xùn)班結(jié)束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力盡。感到精疲力盡。A. His wife came back home after the advanced A. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired.training class, feeling very tired.B. His wife came back home after the advanced B. His wif

12、e came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. training class, feeling very exhausted. 4. 4. 他沒聽我課上講的東西。他沒聽我課上講的東西。A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the A He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. class. B He didnt listen to what I said in the class. B He

13、didnt listen to what I said in the class. When it comes to the issue of, the majority of people seem to get accustomed to the idea that However, attitudes towardsvary from person to person. some people firmly believe that, there are some factorscontributing to this attitude as follows, in the first

14、place,in the second place,. On top of that, As a matter of fact, it is not often the case. Others have a preference of, there are several remarkable reasons. For one thing, for another On my part,. 1. 利用模板利用模板方法方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容內(nèi)容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成分作解釋說明例一：這樣更方便照顧父母。例一：這樣更方

15、便照顧父母。 拓展：因?yàn)楦改冈絹碓侥赀~。拓展：因?yàn)楦改冈絹碓侥赀~。 原因原因 as they are getting older and older. Owing to / because例二：因廣告過多，例二：因廣告過多， 影片放映晚點(diǎn)影片放映晚點(diǎn) 。拓展：這導(dǎo)致觀眾不耐煩甚至惱火拓展：這導(dǎo)致觀眾不耐煩甚至惱火 。后果后果 which made audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.making audience impatient and some of them even annoyed.It will be much more

16、 convenient to look after your parentsThere were too many advertisements that they delayed the time of showing the film, 方法方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容內(nèi)容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成分作解釋說明條件條件 目的目的 例三：安全出口（例三：安全出口（exit）標(biāo)志不明，）標(biāo)志不明， 存在安全隱患存在安全隱患(potential hazard）。）。 拓展：萬一遇到危險(xiǎn)， 觀眾難以逃脫。 In case of d

17、anger, it is difficult for the audience to escape.例四：對(duì)中學(xué)生假期通訊方式進(jìn)行了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查 We did a survey about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday拓展：為了了解對(duì)中學(xué)生假期通訊方式 In order to learn about how our high school students communicate with each other during the holiday, we did a surv

18、ey with the help of my classmates. The exit is not clear, so there will be potential hazard.方法方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容內(nèi)容2、附加成分作解釋說明、附加成分作解釋說明(1)表達(dá)不同原因的概括語表達(dá)不同原因的概括語There are several reasons for this.The reasons are as follows.The reason foris thatThe reason why is that(2)表示無需說明

19、的事實(shí)的概括語：表示無需說明的事實(shí)的概括語：It goes without saying thatIts needless to say thatNeedless to say, Its obvious that3.加諺語加諺語(Proverb)鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處鍛煉對(duì)學(xué)生有好處 It is good for us students to take exercise.As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.3. 添加諺

20、語添加諺語加諺語加諺語(Proverb)集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)集中注意力于學(xué)習(xí)We should focus our mind on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should focus our mind on our studies.怎么添加諺語？怎么添加諺語？方法方法添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容添加與所給信息有關(guān)的前因后果及條件，目的等內(nèi)容常用諺語常用諺語(Proverb)Strike the iron while it is hot.趁熱打鐵。趁熱打鐵。Think twice before

21、you do.三思而后行。三思而后行。Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。A bird in the hand is worth than two in the bush.一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林。一鳥在手勝過雙鳥在林。Do as the Romans do.入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。入鄉(xiāng)隨俗。 Do it now.機(jī)不可失，時(shí)不再來。機(jī)不可失，時(shí)不再來。Failure is the mother of success.失敗是成功之母。失敗是成功之母。 It is no use crying over spilt milk.覆水難收。覆水難收。 An apple a day keep

22、s the doctor away.一天一個(gè)蘋果，一天一個(gè)蘋果， 醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。All roads lead to Rome.條條大路通羅馬。條條大路通羅馬。 青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球青少年應(yīng)盡我們所能保護(hù)環(huán)境拯救地球We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we c

23、an use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products, plant more trees and save water and energy.4. 舉例說明舉例說明人口密集地區(qū)遭受許多自然災(zāi)害（舉例說明）人口密集地區(qū)遭受許多自然災(zāi)害（舉例說明）Many populated areas suffer from many natural disasters such as flood, hurricanes, droughts or other disasters.珍惜每一滴水珍惜每一滴水

24、Therefore, we should no longer be indifferent about this. To protect our valuable water resources, we should call on people to cherish every drop of water. Otherwise, maybe the last drops of water will be our tears. As middle school students, we also have a part to play. Do remember: we are not savi

25、ng water , we are saving our own life. With everyone doing his bit, we can make a difference.5. 結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召As students, we should start from ourselves . Here Id like to remind my friend to take the lead in protecting the environment. With everyone doing his bit, we can change the present situ

26、ation. 參加俱樂部或活動(dòng)參加俱樂部或活動(dòng)Dont hesitate. It will be great fun!Dont wait. Join us now!Since it has so many benefits, what are you waiting for?Start to join us now!保護(hù)環(huán)境保護(hù)環(huán)境“短話長說短話長說”方法：方法：1. 利用模板利用模板 2. 附加成分作解釋說明附加成分作解釋說明 3. 加諺語加諺語(Proverb)4. 舉例說明舉例說明 5. 結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召結(jié)尾提出倡議或號(hào)召 寫作任務(wù)寫作任務(wù) 現(xiàn)在，青少年肥胖越來越嚴(yán)重， 很讓父母擔(dān)心。

27、請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇文章 參考詞匯：肥胖：obesity 垃圾食品：junk food要求：1. 字?jǐn)?shù)150左右 2. 對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)要適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 不要簡單翻譯。 3. 開頭已給出， 不計(jì)入總數(shù)Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned._ 原因原因1.缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)2.飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理建議1.多參加體育鍛煉2.多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品3. 要點(diǎn)分析要點(diǎn)分析如何起、轉(zhuǎn)、承、結(jié)如何起、轉(zhuǎn)、承、結(jié)On my part,1. 利用模板利用模板When it comes to

28、the phenomenon of teen obesity , our parents are in great concern. Why are so many kids getting fatter and fatter?Some are , others areBecause of the popularity of TV and computers, and because students have so much homework to do, they are getting less exercise than before.1. 缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)缺少運(yùn)動(dòng) Because of th

29、e popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdened with so much homework,Because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to buy many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight.2. 飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理飲食結(jié)構(gòu)不合理 In ord

30、er to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and do more exercise.建議1. 多參加體育鍛煉 As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits and vegetables, and less fast food a

31、nd junk food.2. 多吃健康食品， 遠(yuǎn)離垃圾食品Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance our exercise and studies.3.制定合理的計(jì)劃， 時(shí)間表合成文章合成文章 Recently, the phenomenon of teen obesity has made a lot of parents concerned. Why are teens getting fatter and fatter? In my opinion, the

32、re are two remarkable reasons for this problem. Firstly, because of the popularity of TV and computers, and students are burdeded with so much homework to do. They are getting less exercise than before. Secondly, because peoples quality of life has gotten better and better, families can afford to bu

33、y many foods, such as meat, chocolate and other sweet or oily snacks, which might make the kids overweight. For another ,On the other hand,arousedFor one thing ,On the one hand, In order to lose weight and stay healthy, teens should avoid spending too much time in front of the TV or the computer and

34、 do more exercise. As the saying goes, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” They should also eat a more balanced diet such as fruits , vegetables, less fast food and junk food. Last but not least, they should make a proper time schedule so that they can balance their exercise and studies.Thanks Bye-bye!Thanks Bye-bye!