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1、一、使用高級詞匯一、使用高級詞匯 詞匯量能反映一個人知識貯存量的多少,也是衡量英詞匯量能反映一個人知識貯存量的多少,也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標準??忌肴〉酶叻?,就要強化使語水平的一個重要標準??忌肴〉酶叻郑鸵獜娀褂脧碗s、高級的詞匯。常用方法如下:用復雜、高級的詞匯。常用方法如下:1多實少虛多實少虛寫作中多用寫作中多用specific words,少使用,少使用general words,多用,多用蘊含感情色彩的詞語,少用中性詞。如蘊含感情色彩的詞語,少用中性詞。如good指人時可用指人時可用以下形容詞替換:以下形容詞替換:kind, honest, generous, selfl
2、ess, brave, warmhearted, sympathetic, honorable, humorous, smart, gentle等;等;good指事物或事情時可用以下形容詞指事物或事情時可用以下形容詞替換:替換:great, fantastic, splendid, marvelous, excellent, wonderful, meaningful, enjoyable, nice等。以下句子中的形等。以下句子中的形容詞雖然都可以用容詞雖然都可以用good代替,但遠不如原句出彩。代替,但遠不如原句出彩。I hope everyone can have a time.He i
3、s a teacher.This is really a idea to go climbing Mount Hua this weekend.wonderfulwarmheartednice2短語優(yōu)先短語優(yōu)先多使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。多使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。I can no longer the way he speaks to us.I can no longer the way he speaks to us.He what I said in the class.He what I said in the class.bearput up with
4、didn tlisten toturned a deaf ear to3棄舊取新棄舊取新寫作中要恰當?shù)皿w地使用高中學過的、較長的詞匯。寫作中要恰當?shù)皿w地使用高中學過的、較長的詞匯。We all have the same chance.We all possess the same chance (opportunity)We have a_lot_of homework to do at the weekend.We have endless homework to do at the weekend.4避免重復避免重復盡量避免過多地使用某一個單詞,必要時選擇使用其他盡量避免過多地使用某一個
5、單詞,必要時選擇使用其他恰當?shù)耐x詞或詞組來代替。恰當?shù)耐x詞或詞組來代替。I like reading while my brother likes watching football matches.I like reading while my brother enjoys watching football matches.Weve built a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also built a library where the old playground used to be. Weve built
6、 a new experiment building beside the old one and weve also set_up a library where the old playground used to be. 二、使用較復雜結構二、使用較復雜結構 1在一篇文章中要適當?shù)馗淖冋Z法結構來增加文章表達方在一篇文章中要適當?shù)馗淖冋Z法結構來增加文章表達方式的多樣性。式的多樣性。(1)改變時態(tài)和語態(tài)改變時態(tài)和語態(tài)The bell is ringing now.There goes the bell!(2)使用名詞性從句使用名詞性從句It disappointed everybody th
7、at the player was badly injured in the first round.The fact that the player was badly injured in the first round disappointed everybody.(3)使用較高級的狀語從句使用較高級的狀語從句I wont believe what you say. No matter what you say, I wont believe. (4)使用定語從句使用定語從句The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well wri
8、tten.The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. (5)使用虛擬語氣使用虛擬語氣You didnt take my advice, so you failed in the exam.If you had taken my advice, you wouldnt have failed in the exam.(6)使用倒裝句使用倒裝句Some valuable books and my credit cards are in it.In it are some valuable books and my
9、 credit cards.(7)使用強調句型使用強調句型He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.2改變句子開頭的方式。不要一味地采用改變句子開頭的方式。不要一味地采用“主語主語謂語謂語賓語賓語”的文法語序??梢赃m當?shù)匕岩恍┏煞值奈姆ㄕZ序。可以適當?shù)匕岩恍┏煞?如狀語如狀語)提前,提前,放在句子的開頭,這樣使整
10、個句子讀起來跌宕起伏,增放在句子的開頭,這樣使整個句子讀起來跌宕起伏,增加書面表達的表現(xiàn)力。加書面表達的表現(xiàn)力。We met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together early in the morning.Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went to the Hongxing Farm together.The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.Hearing the
11、 bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.3通過整合的方式,把幾個松散的句子用一定的連接方通過整合的方式,把幾個松散的句子用一定的連接方式連接起來,也可以對所學的英語句式加以簡化,使寫式連接起來,也可以對所學的英語句式加以簡化,使寫出來的句子更加準確、得體、簡潔、靈活。出來的句子更加準確、得體、簡潔、靈活。We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess.After a short
12、 rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.用更貼切的詞或短語分別來代替畫波浪線部分的詞或短語用更貼切的詞或短語分別來代替畫波浪線部分的詞或短語1The boy realized the danger and began to run away._答案:答案:was aware of2I have decided to study English better this term._ 答案:答案:made up my mind3I dont know how to enlarge my
13、 vocabulary._ 答案:答案:have no idea4Well try our best to develop the traditional friendship between us. _; _答案:答案:spare no efforts; promote5It is cold this winter. A drop of water will freeze in no time._答案:答案:freezing6He is a nice student. He often makes us laugh and we have much fun with him. _答案:答案:
14、humorous7Surprisingly, the little girl knows so many things. _答案:答案:To our surprise8She decorated her bedroom well._答案:答案:wonderfully9The house is on the second floor, with two bedrooms, a bathroom and a kitchen. _答案:答案:flat10Peter is good to others. He always gives away things to those in trouble._
15、答案:答案:generous.使用較復雜結構修改下面三段話,使其簡潔、連貫、緊湊使用較復雜結構修改下面三段話,使其簡潔、連貫、緊湊 1Its a flat of 25 square meters. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well. _答案:答案:Its a flat of 25 square meters, with a
16、bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. The bedroom is furnished with a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair. 2There is a new multimedia building on one side of the road. There used to be a playground on the other side. But there is a library now. There are all kinds of books, newspapers and magazines in the
17、library. There is a new playground in the front of the school. There are a lot of trees in and around the school._答案:答案:On one side of the road there is a new multimedia building. On the other side, where the playground used to be, now stands another new building our library, in which you can find a
18、ll kinds of books, newspapers and magazines. A new playground is now in the front of the school. We have also planted a lot of trees in and around the school. 3There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing. They serve passengers heart and soul. They play an important part in the traffic of Bei
19、jing. They make some money. They work from dawn till night. One day, I left my cellphone in the taxi I took. I got in touch with the driver. He drove to my home and gave it back to me. I was very excited. _答案:答案:There are a large number of taxi drivers in Beijing, serving passengers heart and soul a
20、nd playing an important part in the traffic of Beijing. In order to make some money to support their families, they work from dawn till night. One day, I got out of the taxi in a hurry with my cellphone left in the taxi I took. On hearing what had happened, the taxi driver drove to my home as fast as possible and gave the cellphone back to me. Seeing my cellphone again, I was too excited to say a word.