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1、2020年初升高英語(yǔ)英語(yǔ)技能銜接 一、 考試說(shuō)明對(duì)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的要求 提供一段350詞以?xún)?nèi)的語(yǔ)言材料，要求考生依據(jù)該材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)所標(biāo)示關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě) （150詞左右），將其發(fā)展成一篇與給定材料有邏輯銜接、情節(jié)和結(jié)構(gòu)完整的短文。閱卷時(shí)將主要考慮以下 內(nèi)容： 1、 與所給短文及段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)的銜接程度；2、 內(nèi)容的豐富性和對(duì)所給關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)的覆蓋情況； 3、 應(yīng)用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；4、 上下文的連貫性。 二、 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)評(píng)分原則 1、 本題總分為25分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。 2、 評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量、確定或 調(diào)整

2、檔次，最后給分。 3、 詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分。 4、 評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮： 5、 拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性的一個(gè)重要方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。 6、 如書(shū)寫(xiě)較差以致影響交際，可將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。 三、 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)讀什么 1、 讀體裁：記敘文 2、 讀結(jié)構(gòu)：人物、時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、注意人稱(chēng)和時(shí)態(tài) 3、 讀情節(jié)：事件經(jīng)過(guò) 4、 讀劃線(xiàn)詞：10個(gè)（抄在草紙上） 5、 讀段首句:所給兩段的首句都有著承上啟下的作用，一定要徹底讀懂。 四、 讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)寫(xiě)什么 1、 寫(xiě)故事的結(jié)局（有時(shí)含觀點(diǎn)態(tài)度）。 2、 寫(xiě)兩段：續(xù)寫(xiě)這篇短文時(shí)，考生需要明

3、白故事的發(fā)展進(jìn)程、前因后果、時(shí)間和位置變化、人物特征和 情感等。 3、 根據(jù)線(xiàn)索，發(fā)揮想象，對(duì)其后的情節(jié)進(jìn)行合理預(yù)測(cè)，并用英語(yǔ)正確表達(dá)出來(lái)。 備注：讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)有兩種模式，浙江模式和山東模式，浙江模式有劃線(xiàn)詞，而山東模式?jīng)]有劃線(xiàn)詞，難度相對(duì)降低。 五、讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)的寫(xiě)作步驟 第i步：通讀全文，找出文章的“六要素"。 第二步：分析已知信息，推斷后文走向。 第三步：先打草稿，再潤(rùn)色，做到“言之有物，且言之成文"。 第四步：注意字跡工整，字?jǐn)?shù)合理，并且準(zhǔn)確劃出關(guān)鍵詞。 六、實(shí)例分析（以浙江模式為例） 閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 It was summe

4、r, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and dro

5、ve us up to his fami in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent （he night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to ha

6、ve breakfast.4tThe day starts at dawn on my fann/'he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）.I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I aske

7、d Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. "Don't be late fbr supper," Uncle Paul cried, "an

8、d keep to （he track so that you don't get losU'"'OK!''my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. Il looked like

9、a beautiful woven （編織fl勺）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us. 注意： 1、 所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為15（）左右； 2、 至少使用5個(gè)短文中標(biāo)有卜.劃線(xiàn)的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)； 3、 續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)己為你寫(xiě)好； 4、 續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線(xiàn)標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Paragraph 2: We had no idea where we were a

10、nd it was getting dark. （一） 、前文提要：父親帶兒子去“西部荒野"，喂雞牧羊，體驗(yàn)農(nóng)場(chǎng)生活；見(jiàn)父親和叔叔騎馬很是瀟灑，兒子心生向往，于是親身上馬體驗(yàn)…… （二） 、續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索： 第一段所給首句：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.這一句是故事發(fā)展的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn),可 從rabbit出現(xiàn)后帶來(lái)的結(jié)果入手?jǐn)U展開(kāi)去，可以寫(xiě)馬受到驚嚇狂奔而去，也可以寫(xiě)人的反應(yīng)，無(wú)論從何角度 拓展，需注意與續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段首句呼應(yīng)。 第二段所給首句：We had no idea where we were and it w

11、as getting dark,這一句呼應(yīng)前文 Uncle Paul 的囑 托——不要誤了晚飯，可從如何尋路返恒I入手去寫(xiě)續(xù)文。 （三） 、續(xù)寫(xiě)詞匯（文中提示詞匯） dad, Uncle Paul, farm house> river, feed, sheep, late, track, get lost, sight（四） 、話(huà)題詞匯： 1、 情感：panic, relief, nervous, worried 2、 動(dòng)作：run, cry, think to oneself 3、環(huán)境：scenery, mountain, range, valley> river, lake, f

12、orest, sun, set, wind, blow (五) 、參考范文Paragraph 1: Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There was nothing left in our sight but the trees. "We may not be able to ma

13、ke it back (o the farm house in time for supper.MI thought to myself After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and (ired. Paragraph 2: l險(xiǎn) had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of

14、us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said,"Don't worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the ftimi house. Find the river and we will be back home/Tinally, we found the river and got

15、back to (he house along it. Needless to say, we ale a late dinner. 【拓展閱讀】巴赫在北京冬奧會(huì)閉幕式上的致辭(雙語(yǔ)) 2月2()日晚，北京冬奧會(huì)閉幕式在國(guó)家體育場(chǎng)鳥(niǎo)巢舉行。國(guó)際奧委會(huì)主席巳赫在閉幕式致辭時(shí)四次使 用中文。 “謝謝！中國(guó)！”巴赫用這樣一句字正腔圓的中文感謝開(kāi)啟了自己的致辭。在感謝中國(guó)政府和各方面的 支持后，巴赫第二次用中文說(shuō)：“謝謝你們，中國(guó)朋友！” 巴赫在致辭中還感謝了志愿者的付出，接著他第三次用中文說(shuō)：“志愿者，謝謝你們。 宣布北京冬奧會(huì)閉幕前，巴赫說(shuō)：“這是一屆真正無(wú)與倫比的冬奧會(huì)，我們歡迎中

16、國(guó)成為冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)之 國(guó)?！苯又俅斡弥形恼f(shuō)：“祝賀，中國(guó)！” 以下是致辭雙語(yǔ)全文： Over the past 16 days, we admired your outstanding performances. 在過(guò)去16天里，我對(duì)你們的出色表現(xiàn)欽佩不已。 Each and every one of you strived to achieve your personal best. We were deeply touched how you were wishing and cheering for your competitors to achieve their best a

17、s well. 你們每一個(gè)人都力爭(zhēng)取得最佳成績(jī)，但你們也希望競(jìng)爭(zhēng)對(duì)手取得最佳成績(jī)，并為他們加油。我們?yōu)榇松钍?感動(dòng)。 You not only respected each other. You supported each other. You embraced each other, even if your countries are divided by conflict. 你們不僅彼此尊重，還相互支持，即使有的地方因?yàn)闆_突而對(duì)立，但你們彼此擁抱。 You overcame these divisions, demonstrating that in this Olympic

18、community we are all equal. We are all equal—regardless of what we look like, where we come from, or what we believe in. 你們克服了這些分歧，證明了無(wú)論我們有著怎樣的面容，無(wú)論我們來(lái)自何方，無(wú)論我們的信仰，我們?cè)谶@ 個(gè)奧林匹克大家庭里人人平等。 This unifying power of the Olympic Games is stronger than the forces that want to divide us: you give peace a chanc

19、e. 奧運(yùn)會(huì)團(tuán)結(jié)的力量比那些試圖分離我們的力量更強(qiáng)大。你們給了和平一次機(jī)會(huì)。 May the political leaders around the world be inspired by your example of solidarity and peace. 愿你們樹(shù)立的團(tuán)結(jié)與和平的榜樣鼓舞全世界的政治領(lǐng)導(dǎo)人。 We share this Olympic spirit with all the athletes who because of the pandemic could not make (heir dream come true. 我們與所有因?yàn)橐咔槎鵁o(wú)法參加的運(yùn)

20、動(dòng)員分享這份奧林匹克精神。 It breaks our hearts (hat you could not be with us. 你們的缺席令我們傷心。 But you belong and you will always belong to the Olympic community. 但是你們現(xiàn)在是，并且永遠(yuǎn)都會(huì)是我們奧林匹克大家庭的一分子。 If we want to finally overcome this pandemic, we must be faster, we must aim higher, we must be stronger—we must stand

21、together. 要最終戰(zhàn)勝這次疫情，我們必須追求更快、更高、更強(qiáng)、更團(tuán)結(jié)。 In this Olympic spirit of solidarity, we call on the international community: give equal access to vaccines to everybody around the world. 本著奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)的團(tuán)結(jié)友愛(ài)精神，我們呼吁國(guó)際社會(huì)，請(qǐng)為全世界每個(gè)人提供平等的疫苗接種機(jī)會(huì)。 The Olympic spirit could only shine so brightly, because (he Chinese pe

22、ople set (he stage in such an excellent way—and in a safe way. 奧林匹克精神之所以如此閃耀，得益于中國(guó)人民為我們出色地搭建了安全的奧運(yùn)舞臺(tái)。 The Olympic Villages were outstanding. The venues—magnificent. The organisation一extraordinary. The support of the National Olympic Committees, the International Federations, our TOP Partners and R

23、ights-Holding Broadcasters—unwavering. 本屆冬奧會(huì)的奧運(yùn)村獨(dú)具匠心，場(chǎng)館令人嘆為觀止，組織工作非凡卓越。來(lái)自國(guó)際奧委會(huì)國(guó)際單項(xiàng)體育聯(lián) 合會(huì)，全球合作伙伴，持權(quán)轉(zhuǎn)播商，對(duì)我們的支持堅(jiān)定不移。 Our deepest thanks and gratitude go to the Organising Committee, the public authorities and all our Chinese partners and friends. On behalf of the best winter sport athletes of the wor

24、ld, I say: 我們要向北京冬奧組委、中國(guó)政府部門(mén)，以及我們?cè)谥袊?guó)所有的合作伙伴和朋友致以最誠(chéng)摯的謝意。我謹(jǐn) 代表全球最優(yōu)秀的冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)員們，向你們表示感謝。 Thank you, our Chinese friends! 謝謝你們，中國(guó)朋友！ To all the volunteers I say: you wamied our hearts with your smiling eyes. Your kindness will stay with us forever. 我要對(duì)所有的志愿者說(shuō)，你們眼中的笑意溫暖了我們的心田，你們的友好善意將會(huì)永駐我們心中。 Thank you,

25、 volunteers! 志愿者，謝謝你們！ This unforgettable experience was only possible because of our gracious hosts, the Chinese people. With over 300 million people now engaged in winter sports, with the great success of the Chinese athletes, the positive legacy of these Olympic Games is ensured. 我們之所以能夠有如此難忘的

26、經(jīng)歷，都要?dú)w功于我們熱情好客的東道主，全體中國(guó)人民。目前中國(guó)已經(jīng)有3 億多人參與冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)。中國(guó)的冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)員取得了巨大成功。 With the truly exceptional Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022 we welcome China as a winter sport country. 這是一屆真正無(wú)與倫比的冬奧會(huì)，我們歡迎中國(guó)成為冰雪運(yùn)動(dòng)大國(guó)。 Congratulations, China! 祝賀，中國(guó)！ And now I have to mark the end of this unforgettable Olympic experi

27、ence: I declare the 24th Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022 closed. 現(xiàn)在我不得不為這段令人難忘的奧運(yùn)經(jīng)歷畫(huà)上句號(hào)。我宣布北京2022年第二十四屆冬季奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)閉 幕。 In accordance with (radition, I call upon the youth of the world (o assemble four years 1'rom now in Milano Cortina, Italy, to celebrate with all of us, the 25th Olympic Winter Games. 按照奧林匹克傳統(tǒng)，我號(hào)召全世界青年四年之后在意大利米蘭一科爾蒂納丹佩佐相聚，與我們一起參加第 二十五屆冬季奧林匹克運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。